The Axeman of Demonshore
Beware...19 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
What a feat-hellacious horror indeed.
You have shown the horror mindset and have done a fine job with this one.
Unfortunately these horrible things do still happen in the minds, hearts and actions of some and the world is not immune to its effects.
A great spooky campfire tale and a constant reminder why I am not a happy camper.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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What a feat-hellacious horror indeed.
You have shown the horror mindset and have done a fine job with this one.
Unfortunately these horrible things do still happen in the minds, hearts and actions of some and the world is not immune to its effects.
A great spooky campfire tale and a constant reminder why I am not a happy camper.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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thank you, Shirley and yes, unfortunately, the world is full of even more horrific things. I appreciate you enjoyed and thank you so much for your generous rating! :) xoxo
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Diana a happy Monday to you. I really enjoyed your entry for The Hellacious Horror Club. The flow and rhyme of the poem were spot on, I would never live in a town or anywhere called Demonshore.
Good Job!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Hello Diana a happy Monday to you. I really enjoyed your entry for The Hellacious Horror Club. The flow and rhyme of the poem were spot on, I would never live in a town or anywhere called Demonshore.
Good Job!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Ha! Me either!! Thanks so much for reading it! xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yikes!! Well, now there's one I don't normally expect when I click on your name in my messages... but I shall be prepared from now on seeing as you've 'joined the club' -- lOL! ;) A wonderful offering though, ma'am, and you've got a great presentation going on with it -- I guess the morale here is: don't tease a guy that weilds an ax...no matter how old or creepy you find him!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
P.S. Know I'm running way behind but midterms and else have been eating up the time.... plus, the Fall 'blahs' have taken hold so, I'm trying to spend more time outside! ;) :) Take care! ;)
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Yikes!! Well, now there's one I don't normally expect when I click on your name in my messages... but I shall be prepared from now on seeing as you've 'joined the club' -- lOL! ;) A wonderful offering though, ma'am, and you've got a great presentation going on with it -- I guess the morale here is: don't tease a guy that weilds an ax...no matter how old or creepy you find him!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
P.S. Know I'm running way behind but midterms and else have been eating up the time.... plus, the Fall 'blahs' have taken hold so, I'm trying to spend more time outside! ;) :) Take care! ;)
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Well you enjoy being outside! The fresh air does wonders! I started a new Horror club because the other one was taken down recently and I just didn?t want to see the horror genre fall by the wayside after Halloween! Thanks for reading!! xoxo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Diana. This is a nice Halloweenish little ditty. The graphic as a little disturbing. The story is complete yet leaves a little room for the reader to imagine the axeman is outside their house. Robert
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Hey Diana. This is a nice Halloweenish little ditty. The graphic as a little disturbing. The story is complete yet leaves a little room for the reader to imagine the axeman is outside their house. Robert
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thank you! I figured I should give the graphics a boost since the poem implies ghoulish, but I didn?t cover ghoulish with to many words! Hope it keeps the teens at home where they belong late at night! Haha!!
Comment from Ronni
Wow Diana,
Truly an eerie and bone chilling horror story, with intense dose
of wickedness, both by teens, and reaction by axeman. A tragedy that
has many similar applications to real life kind of wretched taunts
and avengement, and sadly so. There are versions of this kind
of 'axeman' in too many places and too many horror crimes.
As a horror thriller story here, it has all the elements and effects
of a truly spine tingling tale and torment. Awesome pic and music too!
Thanks for sharing dear.
Best always! Ronni
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Wow Diana,
Truly an eerie and bone chilling horror story, with intense dose
of wickedness, both by teens, and reaction by axeman. A tragedy that
has many similar applications to real life kind of wretched taunts
and avengement, and sadly so. There are versions of this kind
of 'axeman' in too many places and too many horror crimes.
As a horror thriller story here, it has all the elements and effects
of a truly spine tingling tale and torment. Awesome pic and music too!
Thanks for sharing dear.
Best always! Ronni
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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So glad you ?enjoyed? :). I started a new horror club because the other one was taken down just days after I joined. I guess the host left FS. I just could let the genre fall by the wayside. This was a fun start for the first event I posted. I have 6 members so far! Without Dean, there was a gap and hopefully, this will help keep it alive and thriving as I?m sure Dean would want. Thank you so much for your precious six also!!! xoxo
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Yes indeed, without Dean, there
was a gap indeed, and bless you for taking up the banner
and starting a new horror club! Am sure your members
will keep increasing as it
catches on. A unique genre, wish I had talents or skills to
write them, but alas I fear not. But there will be plenty
for sure.
Glad you liked the review, it
indeed was a classic style, and sure Dean would have
loved for it to go on. Now it
has through you! Congrats
and thanks!
Always, Ronni
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Thanks Ronni! I hope we all continue to do him proud!!! xoxo
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the Club Challenge splendidly! You deliver a terrifyingly haunting story in true poetic fashion. This was truly an eerily entertaining reading experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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This meets the Club Challenge splendidly! You deliver a terrifyingly haunting story in true poetic fashion. This was truly an eerily entertaining reading experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thank you! It is fun exploring new avenues of writing! Appreciate your support! xoxo
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a very creepy poem, my friend. It would have been a great Halloween poem contest entry. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this horror~Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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This is a very creepy poem, my friend. It would have been a great Halloween poem contest entry. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this horror~Debbie
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thank you! I have another entered for the Halloween contest, but it would have made a good one! Appreciate your supportive feedback! xoxi
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A brilliantly rhymed and metered write here Diana, a horror story with a bloody scene and ideal for Halloween, you triumphed here and stole one of my sixes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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A brilliantly rhymed and metered write here Diana, a horror story with a bloody scene and ideal for Halloween, you triumphed here and stole one of my sixes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much! I am honored you enjoyed it so much! It will be fun to explore this genre within the new Horror club I started. xoxoxo!!!
Comment from Larry5000
Wow very nicely done. Would not have known this was your first attempt at horror. If felt like this was written about somebody in real life, like a true story for sure. Excellent job for sure.
Larry
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Wow very nicely done. Would not have known this was your first attempt at horror. If felt like this was written about somebody in real life, like a true story for sure. Excellent job for sure.
Larry
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Awesome! It is my second poem but definitely the gorier of the two. I think I will enjoy the new Horror club I started. The other was removed sadly. Thanks for your support for this! xoxo
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OK on the second one, so you started the Horror Club? Did not know you like that sort of thing, learn something new all the time. :-)
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Yes I had just joined the other one but they took it down because the host had left FS! And since there?s been such a gap with Dean Kuch?s passing, I just couldn?t let the genre fall by the wayside! :)
Comment from LisaMay
Goodness... what's a nice lady like you doing running around with an axeman in her head? He certainly doesn't have much time for teenagers - things have become rather bloodthirsty. You are honoring Dean's memory well, Diana.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Goodness... what's a nice lady like you doing running around with an axeman in her head? He certainly doesn't have much time for teenagers - things have become rather bloodthirsty. You are honoring Dean's memory well, Diana.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Haha! Oh there are many things I can pull from this imagination of mine! LoL! Thanks so much for reading! I definitely hope to honor him by keeping the genre alive!!! xoxo
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Yes, keeping the genre alive while killing off people!!
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Blahaha! I love that ?looking on the bright side? attitude!! LoL xoxo
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Mmmm.... bright shiny spurting blood!
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You got my side splitting over here and not from the axe! Hahaha!!!
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Don't slip on those innards when they fall out through your split sides.
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We pretty much got a whole new horror story going on here! Maybe I?ll do my first script from this awesome exchange? Could I have your permission to include you in my cast of characters! :). xoxo
