Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

This poem sticks out there as an old friend. Through my nieces and nephews, my own kids, foster children, even put this book into babyshower gifts.
Good job!
Patty

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks for the review Patty. It was a fun write, remembering those candies and imagining a colorful, sweet town. Cheers.

reply by Patty Palmer on 04-Oct-2019

You're welcome!!!

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

MMMM I can feel my teeth hurting from the excellent descriptions you used for the very well done contest entry to Candy Barrell. Loved the simple rhyme and flow

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019

Thanks for the review. It was fun to write. Thankfully it was a dream, haha. Cheers

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This is fun and delightful. I love this line: cobblestone sweets, stepping stones of hard candy. Three 's' words in a row! (Maybe 4, if you count stone in 'cobblestone' too). Also, imagery came alive with such lines as : dripping on sparkles of spun~sugar mountains. This is a most excellent entry for the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019

Thanks for the insightful review Crystie. It was fun to write and to imagine the candy surround. Cheers.