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A Book of Horror and Honor.

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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is well penned and quite emotionally stirring. The pain and torment of the protagonist is palpable. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
    Thanks Mystic Angel.
    Now being the protagonist...
    Would of course be Lucifer...
    While being the Victim...
    Of course would be me.
    Ricky
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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Ricky, I hope to God this isn't a true story, my friend. Life is hard, but death is not a solution whether homicide or suicide. Please put your knives and pills away--someday you will be glad you did (I know from experience). Take care, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
    Thanks Debbie.
    Unfortunately,
    Right after my wife passed away by stopping her meds.
    (A Self-induced suicide)
    From lack of medication.
    I too thought...
    (For the next two and a half years)
    ....
    Exactly, how to do it.
    I even slept with a butcher Knife.
    Until, I actually went out of my mind that day.
    As you may have noted in the editor's notes?
    Or I might have forgot to put it in?
    ...
    This was a Dedicated piece to prevent Suicide in young, teenage, women.
    With an alarming rate of Increase each year.
    Ricky