Monica
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Comment from beizanten
Very interesting background summary like wow the girl is evil. I am glad her plan was ruin; The story is very happening, like there is no boring moment and I got bore easily.
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Very interesting background summary like wow the girl is evil. I am glad her plan was ruin; The story is very happening, like there is no boring moment and I got bore easily.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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She is very evil, but she is a sociopath so she doesn't even know it. Thank so much for the review. Rox
Comment from CrystieCookie999
That Monica character is like a black widow, leaving destruction and dead bodies every other day, it seems. Or maybe it is closer to more of a female Voldemort, able to cause death with a touch of wet, clammy fingers. But even the best-laid plans go wrong, as Sarah was too sick for Rob to leave her. I like these lines, because it shows Rob is devoted to his wife: Rob was appalled that Monica would want him to come to the dinner and leave Sarah home alone sick. No way was he doing that.
Matthew Whiting sealed his doom as soon as he appeared to help Monica with whatever was making people sick. Another great installment in your novel!
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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That Monica character is like a black widow, leaving destruction and dead bodies every other day, it seems. Or maybe it is closer to more of a female Voldemort, able to cause death with a touch of wet, clammy fingers. But even the best-laid plans go wrong, as Sarah was too sick for Rob to leave her. I like these lines, because it shows Rob is devoted to his wife: Rob was appalled that Monica would want him to come to the dinner and leave Sarah home alone sick. No way was he doing that.
Matthew Whiting sealed his doom as soon as he appeared to help Monica with whatever was making people sick. Another great installment in your novel!
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Yes, stay away from Monica. She is bad news all the way. =} She's kind of like me. Just kidding!! Thanks for the great review. Rox
