The Apple Path
The path to the orchard.50 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Ahh, I can almost smell that apple pie. I haven't had a piece of some good old hot apple pie for so long. I love apple crumble too. I don't know if you eat that in your neck of the woods.
This was such a pleasure to read with its alluring rhyme and beautiful picture of enticing apples. Fantastic and a great entry for the competition. Best of luck! ~DD
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
Ahh, I can almost smell that apple pie. I haven't had a piece of some good old hot apple pie for so long. I love apple crumble too. I don't know if you eat that in your neck of the woods.
This was such a pleasure to read with its alluring rhyme and beautiful picture of enticing apples. Fantastic and a great entry for the competition. Best of luck! ~DD
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you, DD. Are you kidding me, I love apple crumble. Yes, we eat that in this neck of the woods. Thank you again for the wonderful review and kind comments. Thinking of you today along with apple pie (or anything apple) for dessert. I better get cracking . . . .
Sally xo
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Yum. I wish I could try the pie. It sounds delicious and to smell it cooking. I bet it's amazing. I make pecan pie every once in awhile. That's good too. Great job
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
Yum. I wish I could try the pie. It sounds delicious and to smell it cooking. I bet it's amazing. I make pecan pie every once in awhile. That's good too. Great job
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much, Megan. I appreciate the wonderful review and kind comments. I hope you have a wonderful day too. Sending my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from Susanjohn
LOVE THIS SALLY!! Yummy apple pie! What could be better ( reminds me I need to get to the orchard) Now, we just need a little warm caramel sauce and a nice big scoop of icecream :-)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
LOVE THIS SALLY!! Yummy apple pie! What could be better ( reminds me I need to get to the orchard) Now, we just need a little warm caramel sauce and a nice big scoop of icecream :-)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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Amen, my sister! Thank you for the marvelous review and generous six stars. I?m so pleased you enjoyed my adoring apple tribute and contest entry. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Good for you! :) I regret being out of sixes. This is a bit different coming from you and again, I LOVE IT. I love apples, not so much on the pie, but glad you won! I swear, you could take any topic and turn it into a well written piece of work! Hugs to you! I have decided that writing must be your sixth sense.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
Good for you! :) I regret being out of sixes. This is a bit different coming from you and again, I LOVE IT. I love apples, not so much on the pie, but glad you won! I swear, you could take any topic and turn it into a well written piece of work! Hugs to you! I have decided that writing must be your sixth sense.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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Thank you, dear Wendy. I?ve had such sweet feedback on this poem and contest entry. I so pleased you enjoyed it. I love fall and apples. I hope to go on a road trip and get some fresh-picked apples soon for that pie. Okay, pies . . . .
Sending my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely entry into the contest about a walk and a picture. Nicely composed and with a rewarding ending. No one will ever be thankful for my baking, however, my mother was an expert when it came to pie baking. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
This is a lovely entry into the contest about a walk and a picture. Nicely composed and with a rewarding ending. No one will ever be thankful for my baking, however, my mother was an expert when it came to pie baking. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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This makes everyone hungry. I adore apples and think if I were ever a farmer, this would be my crop. I?ve picked a lot of fresh, delicious apples in my life and enjoyed writing this one. Thanks so much for the lovely review.
Sending you my best today as,
Sally xo
Comment from l.raven
HI Sally, your poem made me hungry...I love
apple pie...and I love your poem my sweet friend...
I'm so glad it was the prize winner at the fair...very nicely written sweet girl...and I love this picture...
so good to see you...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
HI Sally, your poem made me hungry...I love
apple pie...and I love your poem my sweet friend...
I'm so glad it was the prize winner at the fair...very nicely written sweet girl...and I love this picture...
so good to see you...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you, dearest Linda. I miss you and was delighted to see your sweet review and kind compliments.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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Hi Sally, your so welcome sweet girl...it seems like there aren't enough hours in the day anymore...sending you my best as well...take care...and god Bless...love you...xxoo
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I?m hoping to see more of you this Fall, sweet girl. I miss you terribly. xoxoxo
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your a sweetheart Sally...I'm working on it...love you..xxoo
Comment from Louise Michelle
Yummy! There's nothing quite like fresh apples - how lovely to be able to pick them right off the tree. And, of course, baked in a pie is perfection personified. I enjoyed reading this, Sally, but have one complaint. Now I'm dying for an apple, haha. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
Yummy! There's nothing quite like fresh apples - how lovely to be able to pick them right off the tree. And, of course, baked in a pie is perfection personified. I enjoyed reading this, Sally, but have one complaint. Now I'm dying for an apple, haha. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments, Louise. It is so appreciated and encouraging.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally Law xo
Comment from WryWriter
Your poem has me wanting an apple pie!! Nothing more delicious than fresh, homegrown fruit. I really liked the second and third stanzas...flowed off the tongue. Good rhyming scheme. Love the photo!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
Your poem has me wanting an apple pie!! Nothing more delicious than fresh, homegrown fruit. I really liked the second and third stanzas...flowed off the tongue. Good rhyming scheme. Love the photo!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thank you, dear Wry Writer. I appreciate your excellent review and specific praise of apple pie.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Sally this is just so lovely. I loved the imagery of the now ripe apples and I could just as well have been there. It's a lovely entry for the contest and I wish you good luck. Warm regards. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
Awe, Sally this is just so lovely. I loved the imagery of the now ripe apples and I could just as well have been there. It's a lovely entry for the contest and I wish you good luck. Warm regards. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Ulla. I?m so glad you enjoyed my path to,tje apple orchard.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from poetwatch
So you picked a peck of juicy apples, Sally. They are good for the body and the soul. As the saying goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away." :) They are delicious... well, most of them. This is a good entry for the Take a Walk Poetry contest.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
So you picked a peck of juicy apples, Sally. They are good for the body and the soul. As the saying goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away." :) They are delicious... well, most of them. This is a good entry for the Take a Walk Poetry contest.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you, dear poet. I?m glad you enjoyed my walk down the apple path and contest entry.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :+)