Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Greatest Gift - Chapter 12"A Wartime Romance
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed how you brought the events of the era into the romance. It makes it very believable and how it puts us readers in the story. I enjoyed reading this post and can't wait for more.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed how you brought the events of the era into the romance. It makes it very believable and how it puts us readers in the story. I enjoyed reading this post and can't wait for more.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Hi Barbara! Glad you enjoyed this chapter of Love Long Distance. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. Thank you also for your continued support. Chapter 13 is in the works and coming soon! Have a wonderful weekend!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Nowhereman1
Very well written, you paint a very vivid picture. The story and interesting and engaging and I want to know what will happen next. These types of stories are usually not my thing but the way it was written kept me interested
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Very well written, you paint a very vivid picture. The story and interesting and engaging and I want to know what will happen next. These types of stories are usually not my thing but the way it was written kept me interested
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Hi Nowhereman, Welcome to FanStory! Thank You for reading and reviewing this chapter. You say it is well written, interesting and engaging, yet you gave us only a 4 star rating.Usually, if less than 5 stars, the reviewer gives some suggestions for improvement. Do you have any? Much appreciated. Wishing you a great weekend!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sasha
I enjoyed this chapter immensely. I cannot wait to read the next one. I love how you are presenting the characters. It feels as though they were made for each other. I love the trip to Nashville. Great job with this one.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed this chapter immensely. I cannot wait to read the next one. I love how you are presenting the characters. It feels as though they were made for each other. I love the trip to Nashville. Great job with this one.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Sasha, for the AWESOME six star rating and review! We really appreciate it! Also, thank you for your continued support. Love your comments, and glad you enjoyed this! The next chapter is in the works and coming soon. Have a wonderful weekend!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
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You are welcome
Comment from Mistydawn
What a beautiful chapter. So warm, heartfelt, emotional. I could feel the love they have for each other on every line. I do hope they'll be together again. I have to ask what does hkayk mean? Hugs, kisses and your? Am I close?
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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What a beautiful chapter. So warm, heartfelt, emotional. I could feel the love they have for each other on every line. I do hope they'll be together again. I have to ask what does hkayk mean? Hugs, kisses and your? Am I close?
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Hi Mistdawn! That you say you "can feel the love" means so much! HKAYK means exactly that - Hugs, Kisses and...YOU KNOW! :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this. Also, for your continued support. We're so glad you found Chapter 12 beautiful and heartfelt. Chapter 13 is already in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is well penned and thoroughly engaging from start to finish. I really enjoyed the mini-travelogue on Nashville as you do a credible job of painting the city's delights - both the historical and pleasurable experiences to be had. The letter writing is a creative way to continue to build both the characters and the storyline. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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This is well penned and thoroughly engaging from start to finish. I really enjoyed the mini-travelogue on Nashville as you do a credible job of painting the city's delights - both the historical and pleasurable experiences to be had. The letter writing is a creative way to continue to build both the characters and the storyline. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Hi Mystic Angel 777! Your comments are awesome, and we're so glad you enjoyed this chapter and felt it was well penned and thoroughly engaging. Thank you for reading and reviewing it. Also, we greatly appreciate your continued support. Chapter 13 is already in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello again to the dynamic duo, hope this review finds you well on this Wednesday morning. I really enjoyed this chapter, not just because I'm a closeted hopeless romantic but I loved the fact that you made it feel like we were ease dropping on the hearts and minds of two people deeply in love. If we can all find love like that, this world would be in a much better place. Great work my friends!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Hello again to the dynamic duo, hope this review finds you well on this Wednesday morning. I really enjoyed this chapter, not just because I'm a closeted hopeless romantic but I loved the fact that you made it feel like we were ease dropping on the hearts and minds of two people deeply in love. If we can all find love like that, this world would be in a much better place. Great work my friends!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Hello there, the13thpoet! It is now Thursday, so hope your week has been grand. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, as well! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Awesome comments! Also, thank you for your continued support. The love between these two continues...Chapter 13 is in the works and coming soon!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from robyn corum
Hey, guys,
You can sure tell these guys are in the first flush of romance. GAG! hahahahaha All they can see or know is each other. I remember those days - and I know it when I see it. When the two people can't keep their hands to their selves or keep their eyes off each other. hahaha I think ya'll are doing it justice. I just want to look away. *smile*
I do wonder about the part where Cathy gets saved - generally that is an AMAZING time of life and it kinda puts a new slant on things - I'm thinking she might be leading the letter with that and talking more about it - how it has changed her perspective on things. Not just one tiny line on it?? Just a thought.
No nits. Looked great. Thanks!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Hey, guys,
You can sure tell these guys are in the first flush of romance. GAG! hahahahaha All they can see or know is each other. I remember those days - and I know it when I see it. When the two people can't keep their hands to their selves or keep their eyes off each other. hahaha I think ya'll are doing it justice. I just want to look away. *smile*
I do wonder about the part where Cathy gets saved - generally that is an AMAZING time of life and it kinda puts a new slant on things - I'm thinking she might be leading the letter with that and talking more about it - how it has changed her perspective on things. Not just one tiny line on it?? Just a thought.
No nits. Looked great. Thanks!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Hi Robyn! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for your continued support and help. The experience with being saved will be shared more in the next chapter. It is already in the works and will be posted soon. Agree it is an AMAZING time - a life-changing experience! We appreciate you pointing that out. Wishing you a wonderful weekend!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Good chapter. Without having read what comes b efore, I'm not sure how it moves the story forward. But it works well as a s tand alone, with the interesting details of her trip to Nashville and their memories of their night together. And the foreboding shadow of him going to Viet Nam.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Good chapter. Without having read what comes b efore, I'm not sure how it moves the story forward. But it works well as a s tand alone, with the interesting details of her trip to Nashville and their memories of their night together. And the foreboding shadow of him going to Viet Nam.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Hi Darlene! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 12 of Love Long Distance. The letter writing is meant to enrich the storyline and characters, moving it along. Other chapters are more action-filled. We're glad you enjoyed this. Chapter 13 is already in the works and coming soon. Have a great upcoming weekend!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
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You two are so amazingly productive!
Comment from JLR
Dear Bill & Cathy it is remarkable p, reading this addition to your book, that one could actually imagine holding a stack of love letters from some relatives past and have a snapshot of a moment of distance in a passionate love life. Very masterful work indeed. Write on and write often.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Dear Bill & Cathy it is remarkable p, reading this addition to your book, that one could actually imagine holding a stack of love letters from some relatives past and have a snapshot of a moment of distance in a passionate love life. Very masterful work indeed. Write on and write often.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Hi JLR! That you say it is "very masterful work" means a lot to us! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for your continued support. We're happy that, while reading this, you were able to visualize a scene. AWESOME! Chapter 13 is in the works and coming soon. Have a wonderful weekend!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Patty Palmer
I enjoyed this chapter as much as I have the previous chapters. Of course, I'll be waiting to read the next one. I think I've gotten to know the characters pretty well. Cathy and Bill were made for each other! I get a kick out of Grandpa and how he tries to keep Cathy busy.
OK see ya in the next chapter!
Patty
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed this chapter as much as I have the previous chapters. Of course, I'll be waiting to read the next one. I think I've gotten to know the characters pretty well. Cathy and Bill were made for each other! I get a kick out of Grandpa and how he tries to keep Cathy busy.
OK see ya in the next chapter!
Patty
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Hi Patty! We really appreciate you reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for your continued support. Thank you! We're happy you are enjoying the novel so far. You won't have to wait too long for the next chapter because it is already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful upcoming weekend!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
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Sounds good! You have a great weekend as well@
