Hot Dressing
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Comment from sunnilicious
The irony between artwork choice and poem. Funny. We all like to be comfortable. Well thought out and creative. Enjoyable to read. Also, you met the word count. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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The irony between artwork choice and poem. Funny. We all like to be comfortable. Well thought out and creative. Enjoyable to read. Also, you met the word count. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your detailed and generous review.
Comment from victor 66
When you look for something in an abbreviated dress code on public transportation, I find it most unlikely you will find it. However, when you least expect it, there she is. I would be the last argue with the positivity of such an image. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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When you look for something in an abbreviated dress code on public transportation, I find it most unlikely you will find it. However, when you least expect it, there she is. I would be the last argue with the positivity of such an image. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Yes, it certainly shouted out at me. Unfortunately, the voters weren't too positive
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Well Katherine, you gave it your best try and that's all you can do. I still enjoyed it and I make no apologies.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. Of course the pictures very reminiscent of Marilyn Monroe and your six word: was well assembled. The picture and the verse complement each other.. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. Of course the pictures very reminiscent of Marilyn Monroe and your six word: was well assembled. The picture and the verse complement each other.. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. Unfortunately, this was a case of failure (referring to your own recent writing)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem about the red hot dress that draws the eye to look and keep looking and see the best of the wearer of the red clothes that make a statement.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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A very well-written six-word poem about the red hot dress that draws the eye to look and keep looking and see the best of the wearer of the red clothes that make a statement.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your positive review. If only I could have transposed reviews to votes
Comment from Gail Denham
What I've always wondered is: how on earth do they keep those dresses up?? When they are barely there, leaving lots of bare. Amazing. Your six words are cute and no doubt true. Even a president fell for this one.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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What I've always wondered is: how on earth do they keep those dresses up?? When they are barely there, leaving lots of bare. Amazing. Your six words are cute and no doubt true. Even a president fell for this one.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you for stopping by
Comment from Mark D. R.
Fun entry with such an exquisite Marilyn Monroe to reinforce your few words. Of course, while volumes were written about her looks, acting, and her short life, only one word best describes her total package: 'Wow!'
Good luck in the voting for your tribute to MM..
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Fun entry with such an exquisite Marilyn Monroe to reinforce your few words. Of course, while volumes were written about her looks, acting, and her short life, only one word best describes her total package: 'Wow!'
Good luck in the voting for your tribute to MM..
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your support
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cute choice of the picture and everything is so red:) - Pristine red: lips, hoodie, sneakers blaze.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Cute choice of the picture and everything is so red:) - Pristine red: lips, hoodie, sneakers blaze.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review, yes, it was quite an astonishing sight.
Comment from LisaMay
People-watching on public transport is an enjoyable pastime - especially when one is rewarded as you were by the sight of someone who has taken care with their appearance. There are so many slobs on the loose these days.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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People-watching on public transport is an enjoyable pastime - especially when one is rewarded as you were by the sight of someone who has taken care with their appearance. There are so many slobs on the loose these days.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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I find the slobs interesting too. I am a confirmed people-watcher. It's a really bad habit, but it does throw up some pearls.
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As long as it doesn't make YOU throw up.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Let;'s see, are we talking about Marilyn, or about Red Robin Hood? I always wonder how to write a long review about 6 words, lol. I'm thinking R ed Robin Hood because of the sneakers.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Let;'s see, are we talking about Marilyn, or about Red Robin Hood? I always wonder how to write a long review about 6 words, lol. I'm thinking R ed Robin Hood because of the sneakers.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thanks for stopping by, and leaving me with food for thought. It's all one can hope for with respect to 6 words I think.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a technically correct Six Line Poem. The content is certainly image driven and you executed that well - what is a "huddie"? Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a technically correct Six Line Poem. The content is certainly image driven and you executed that well - what is a "huddie"? Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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I am fixing the spelling, I meant hoodie. Thanks for picking it up. I am also strengthening the author's note to explain a bit better the visuals of what I saw.
