Native Nature
The opportunities to see God/Spirit in nature11 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When you are up against the elements, all these things mean so much! I dare say some myths grew over time, but also the rich spiritual combination of nature in life took on some truthful meanings for these native Americans, culture that is remembered here, well said, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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When you are up against the elements, all these things mean so much! I dare say some myths grew over time, but also the rich spiritual combination of nature in life took on some truthful meanings for these native Americans, culture that is remembered here, well said, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Mastery
Hi again Jim. You certainly have been active of late. LOL I took a week off and missed quite a bit of ail but managed to catch up on some things like your writes in the last few days. This Lune is very original-sounding and I enjoyed the theme. I wish you good luck in the contest. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Hi again Jim. You certainly have been active of late. LOL I took a week off and missed quite a bit of ail but managed to catch up on some things like your writes in the last few days. This Lune is very original-sounding and I enjoyed the theme. I wish you good luck in the contest. : ) Bob
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thanks Bob, With the bride in the hospital and now home I recovery mode I do admit I am binging on writing, better than binging on other spirits LOL
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Sorry to hear that, Jim. Bless you and yours. Bob
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lune poem about the creation and native nature that we must respect and honor every aspect of the universe and nature.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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A very well-written Lune poem about the creation and native nature that we must respect and honor every aspect of the universe and nature.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Gail Denham
Nice poem - and aptly illustrated by that beautiful image you chose. There is so much to enjoy and talk about in nature. The color of flowers - the different kinds of bushes and trees - the colors on animals, frogs, and birds. So very much.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Nice poem - and aptly illustrated by that beautiful image you chose. There is so much to enjoy and talk about in nature. The color of flowers - the different kinds of bushes and trees - the colors on animals, frogs, and birds. So very much.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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The tapestry of the divine unfolds before our very eyes in nature.
Comment from lyenochka
Great artwork to illustrate your lune poem! Yes, the Native Americans have given us much to appreciate in their connection to nature. The first line of your poem also brings to mind other ancient peoples including the Greeks and Romans.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Great artwork to illustrate your lune poem! Yes, the Native Americans have given us much to appreciate in their connection to nature. The first line of your poem also brings to mind other ancient peoples including the Greeks and Romans.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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The Aztecs, the Egyptians, Desert Mothers and Fathers and more and more.. :)
Comment from moongirlwriter
I so agree with these words. . .and I also think they are all connected as is everything else in our world. this is well-written and the graphic goes well with the writing. Good luck with this piece.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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I so agree with these words. . .and I also think they are all connected as is everything else in our world. this is well-written and the graphic goes well with the writing. Good luck with this piece.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thank you, so many cultures, so many connections --we must soon learn it is all universally co-joined.
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we are an eco-system. . .not hard to understand that we are a part of that eco-system. :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork, JLR.
-I am so glad to
see her work on various poems;
she is very talented.
-Your notes are appreciated, too.
-The syllable count is good,
as well as the topic.
-I like how you mention
the various elements that
make up the earth,
and share their importance
to our Native Americans.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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-Very nice artwork, JLR.
-I am so glad to
see her work on various poems;
she is very talented.
-Your notes are appreciated, too.
-The syllable count is good,
as well as the topic.
-I like how you mention
the various elements that
make up the earth,
and share their importance
to our Native Americans.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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thank you Pam, every day is a holiday, every meal a banquet...
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You are welcome, and thanks for sharing.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Thanks for bringing up this theme, we seemed lost without spiritual guidance. Your poem says it loud:"Sun, moon, stars, fire, wind
not just one
but all and much more." Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thanks for bringing up this theme, we seemed lost without spiritual guidance. Your poem says it loud:"Sun, moon, stars, fire, wind
not just one
but all and much more." Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your read and comments on my submission.
Comment from Sally Law
I'm reading 'Dances With Wolves' this summer. Your poem fit in perfectly to my mood today. The native Americans seemed to appreciate our land on the simplest yet deepest levels. A beautifully penned and illustrated short style poem.
Sending you my best today as always, Sal :+)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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I'm reading 'Dances With Wolves' this summer. Your poem fit in perfectly to my mood today. The native Americans seemed to appreciate our land on the simplest yet deepest levels. A beautifully penned and illustrated short style poem.
Sending you my best today as always, Sal :+)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Back at you, also in copious volumes..
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a lovely short poem which meets the format requirements. It has an American Indian theme. We are reminded of how these earliest settlers respected all aspects of nature. Well done.
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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This is a lovely short poem which meets the format requirements. It has an American Indian theme. We are reminded of how these earliest settlers respected all aspects of nature. Well done.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review and comments
