A night of making words sing
Written for Spangle!14 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I saw your poem up for PoM, so came to read it. Sorry, I've been missing for so long, we've had lots of horrid things happening, I'll email you later. Sorry, I missed your Birthday as well, I've missed loads over the last few months. Anyway, this is a great poem, Kay, I love faeries and anything to do with them. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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I saw your poem up for PoM, so came to read it. Sorry, I've been missing for so long, we've had lots of horrid things happening, I'll email you later. Sorry, I missed your Birthday as well, I've missed loads over the last few months. Anyway, this is a great poem, Kay, I love faeries and anything to do with them. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you Mrs Seagull. Glad you liked it. Sad news, Lea passed away last Sunday. The funeral is next week. Been pretty tough trying to organise things. Love, Kace.
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Oh Kay! I'm so sorry! Nothing I can say will ease your pain, but I am so very sorry that Lea has gone. I'll email you. Sending you lots of hugs. xxxxx
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Thank you my dear friend. Love, K.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your use of allusions draws the reader in especially if they believe in ancient magic. The imagery is lovely for those who love and believe in the magic of the moon. The reader will be invited to reflect on how the power of the moon inspires. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Your use of allusions draws the reader in especially if they believe in ancient magic. The imagery is lovely for those who love and believe in the magic of the moon. The reader will be invited to reflect on how the power of the moon inspires. Well expressed.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Liz, thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from country ranch writer
Beautiful picture and work up for this. Fairies is maybe misspelled in place please check. Moonbeams and Faries seem to go together it seems we all have dreams.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Beautiful picture and work up for this. Fairies is maybe misspelled in place please check. Moonbeams and Faries seem to go together it seems we all have dreams.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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faeries is the old English spelling, the original in fact. Glad you like my special friend. Love, Kay.
Comment from JLR
I truly wished so, that I had a six to give. So here is my SOMO (six of my own). Every couplet rings true with perfect clarity and strong conviction writing as a poet does from the depths of their souls. It truly is a divine cosmic space from which words travel through to land through the poets hand onto parchment paper.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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I truly wished so, that I had a six to give. So here is my SOMO (six of my own). Every couplet rings true with perfect clarity and strong conviction writing as a poet does from the depths of their souls. It truly is a divine cosmic space from which words travel through to land through the poets hand onto parchment paper.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Hello JLR, thank you so much for your kind review. It doesn't matter about a six, the fact you liked it is enough for me. Cheers, K.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very pretty poem! That is the truth that when a poet has an idea, there is no rest or sleep until the writing is done. Many times I've woke up in the middle of the night because an idea actually woke me up.
Good job!!
Patty
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Very pretty poem! That is the truth that when a poet has an idea, there is no rest or sleep until the writing is done. Many times I've woke up in the middle of the night because an idea actually woke me up.
Good job!!
Patty
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Hi Patty, Thanks so much for reading. I don't take a pen to bed, I would be up all night! Bless you, Kay.
Comment from Sasha
You did a terrific job with this challenge and created a beautiful poem that touched my heart deeply. My sight is going so quickly I do not know how much more reviewing I will be able to to.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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You did a terrific job with this challenge and created a beautiful poem that touched my heart deeply. My sight is going so quickly I do not know how much more reviewing I will be able to to.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Hello my dear friend. I am sorry to hear about your sight. Is there a way you can set the computer up to voice? Speaking words that have been written? I know there is a magnifying glass on Windows 10. Make some enquiries. Much love, Kay XX
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I've tried both, neither work for me.
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Are you in touch with disabled services? Gadgets galore for the blind. Or, contact the blind association?
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Kace. We all hope to make our words sing and resonate with others. Your poem uses the "ing" words to good advantage in this well described and illustrated piece. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Hi Kace. We all hope to make our words sing and resonate with others. Your poem uses the "ing" words to good advantage in this well described and illustrated piece. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thank you for reading Marilyn. Glad you appreciated. Love, K.
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You're welcome. :)
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kace, I love when the night is quiet....and I know that time is mine for writing...and of course when I am driving down the road...and something would hit me...and I never had any thing to write on...you did a wonderful job writing this for Spangle Sweetie Pie...your poem has a beautiful calmness to it...sigh...very well written my wonderful friend...and I love your colors and your picture...love you...Linda xxoo
how are thing going you-who???...it is starting to get cool here...feels kind of good...Florida was down right hot...and from what I hear...it still is...take care sweet angel...later...love xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Hi Kace, I love when the night is quiet....and I know that time is mine for writing...and of course when I am driving down the road...and something would hit me...and I never had any thing to write on...you did a wonderful job writing this for Spangle Sweetie Pie...your poem has a beautiful calmness to it...sigh...very well written my wonderful friend...and I love your colors and your picture...love you...Linda xxoo
how are thing going you-who???...it is starting to get cool here...feels kind of good...Florida was down right hot...and from what I hear...it still is...take care sweet angel...later...love xxoo
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Hello my sweet friend, Thanks for reading, glad you liked. Love, K.
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your so welcome you...always....love back at you...xxoo
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written poem you have penned for Spangle. You used very lovely words and very nice imagery. I enjoyed reading it and I just bet she enjoyed it too. love, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem you have penned for Spangle. You used very lovely words and very nice imagery. I enjoyed reading it and I just bet she enjoyed it too. love, Teri
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Hello Teri, Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Love, K.
Comment from June Sargent
It is a lovely piece that indeed made words sing! You succeeded in painting a word picture of what flows through a writer's mind when she allows her muse to take over and guide her to the stars via moonbeams. An exceptional read with perfect artwork.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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It is a lovely piece that indeed made words sing! You succeeded in painting a word picture of what flows through a writer's mind when she allows her muse to take over and guide her to the stars via moonbeams. An exceptional read with perfect artwork.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Hell June, Thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed. Much love, Kace. XX
