Giving Up
When there's no hope...6 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on winning the Zombie 5-7-5 contest with this ghoulish ensemble. Your wordplay and the matching picture are very effective--timely too with Halloween around the corner! Boo- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Congratulations on winning the Zombie 5-7-5 contest with this ghoulish ensemble. Your wordplay and the matching picture are very effective--timely too with Halloween around the corner! Boo- Joan
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your nice comments. There were so many great entries, I'm surprised I won. Thanks again for reading. :)
Comment from Dihalia
Great poem! Congratulations. I would have never thought about it. Its funny and scary at the same time. Great work! I liked the end and the rhyme. Looking forward to read more of your work.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Great poem! Congratulations. I would have never thought about it. Its funny and scary at the same time. Great work! I liked the end and the rhyme. Looking forward to read more of your work.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your kind words,It was a fun contest with a lot of great entries. Zombies scare me, I hope it never happens ..lol !
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jajajaja yeah let's hope not!
Comment from AprilViolet
Hahahaha! So clever! It's hard to get your point across sometimes in a 5-7-5 but you do so well! Also love your choice of picture!! Thanks for having ME! Lol. So clever!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Hahahaha! So clever! It's hard to get your point across sometimes in a 5-7-5 but you do so well! Also love your choice of picture!! Thanks for having ME! Lol. So clever!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thank you! I wasn't sure that others would get it. Thank you for the nice review
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Zombie is happy with whatever he got, though dinner is dropped by just having a couple limbs and an eye, there is no further hope, give up the rest,well said, well done,
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Zombie is happy with whatever he got, though dinner is dropped by just having a couple limbs and an eye, there is no further hope, give up the rest,well said, well done,
Comment Written 23-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, it's always nice to hear from you.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
very creepy. Not sure I want that kind of dinner. These zombie poems kind of make a Halloween horror story sound scary. I hope the contest is soon here....good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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very creepy. Not sure I want that kind of dinner. These zombie poems kind of make a Halloween horror story sound scary. I hope the contest is soon here....good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for this great review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver the correct theme, line and syllable count. The content is a nice bit of word play using the voracious appetite of the zombie as the framework to build on. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver the correct theme, line and syllable count. The content is a nice bit of word play using the voracious appetite of the zombie as the framework to build on. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this great review. It means a lot to me.
