Come As You Are
A '5-7-5' Contest Offering8 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Very good. Isn't that the truth? Especially for kids to appreciate each other without all the tech trappings shows true friendship. Nicely done in just a few words. Marilyn
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Very good. Isn't that the truth? Especially for kids to appreciate each other without all the tech trappings shows true friendship. Nicely done in just a few words. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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True friends just take the good, the bad, and the horrendously inappropriate (at times)! ;) :) Thanx for the review! ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These unselfish friendships can last a lifetime and I have a friend who I have known since she we were both 8 years old, we have grown up together and she is very dear to me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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These unselfish friendships can last a lifetime and I have a friend who I have known since she we were both 8 years old, we have grown up together and she is very dear to me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for the review!
Comment from RodG
What great advice to give someone who may suffer from low self-esteem and not know how to create real friendships. The key is to always be yourself. Rod
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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What great advice to give someone who may suffer from low self-esteem and not know how to create real friendships. The key is to always be yourself. Rod
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for your review!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have used all of your syllables effectively in this heartwarming poem about friendship--the type of relationship that allows people to be laid back and natural.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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You have used all of your syllables effectively in this heartwarming poem about friendship--the type of relationship that allows people to be laid back and natural.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for your review!
Comment from LisaMay
'Come as you are' is a really good commentary on the artificial nature of many 'friendships' these days. Many people hide behind all sorts of phoniness and artificiality... true friendships should be based on connections with 'real' people who are being themselves and not out to pretend anything or hoodwink others.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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'Come as you are' is a really good commentary on the artificial nature of many 'friendships' these days. Many people hide behind all sorts of phoniness and artificiality... true friendships should be based on connections with 'real' people who are being themselves and not out to pretend anything or hoodwink others.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for your review!
Comment from Sallyo
Charming, like the pic you chose as your illustration. I like the three colour text, and the modern touch of the phone ap... very well done and good luck if this is for a contest
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Charming, like the pic you chose as your illustration. I like the three colour text, and the modern touch of the phone ap... very well done and good luck if this is for a contest
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for your review!
Comment from Susan X Smith
The picture is interesting and works well with your poem. The words are well chosen and the format is correct according to the contest rules. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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The picture is interesting and works well with your poem. The words are well chosen and the format is correct according to the contest rules. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for your review!
Comment from Patty Palmer
The all important right of passage of being accepted as being good friends goes all the way to a practical reward. Keep right on writing!
Patty
God bless!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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The all important right of passage of being accepted as being good friends goes all the way to a practical reward. Keep right on writing!
Patty
God bless!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for your review!
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You're welcome!
