I Hurt a Lovely Heart
Just telling my side of the story.8 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
So you say you aren't perfect but I have news for you neither are we my dear friend! Just be yourself and everyone will love you for it!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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So you say you aren't perfect but I have news for you neither are we my dear friend! Just be yourself and everyone will love you for it!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you Country.
Comment from Sally Law
I don't know if this is for me, I hope that it is. You did hurt me but I don't think it was on purpose. We all do things we regret, dear poet. Forgive me for being upset for so long.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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I don't know if this is for me, I hope that it is. You did hurt me but I don't think it was on purpose. We all do things we regret, dear poet. Forgive me for being upset for so long.
Sal xo
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Am I on the forgiven list, Sally? I missed you. Sorry for writing out of line. :) Most times when I speak I do this guess I have to watch my writing.
Jose
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You?re back on. :+) You?ve missed a lot, I?ve posted like crazy. Me :+))
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is successful as an Acrostic. However, I would suggest that you Bold the first letter of each word to make that clearer. To do this go to "edit" and click on "advanced editor." Your message of apology comes across clearly. Good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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This poem is successful as an Acrostic. However, I would suggest that you Bold the first letter of each word to make that clearer. To do this go to "edit" and click on "advanced editor." Your message of apology comes across clearly. Good luck.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Thank you Susan.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love this part :"Lost are the words, for the smile
Of this clown has turned to stone
Vilified by no reply, which ain't your style.
Entertaining you with my wit of wandering
Lunacy, you saw the bogeyman.
Your heart hardened and sent my traveling". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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I love this part :"Lost are the words, for the smile
Of this clown has turned to stone
Vilified by no reply, which ain't your style.
Entertaining you with my wit of wandering
Lunacy, you saw the bogeyman.
Your heart hardened and sent my traveling". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Thank you Iza.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You speak the truth, you have hurt a lovely heart, but you wrote everything heartily, in haste the replies went wrong, intention was good to make her smile, so lost in words somehow; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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You speak the truth, you have hurt a lovely heart, but you wrote everything heartily, in haste the replies went wrong, intention was good to make her smile, so lost in words somehow; well said, well done.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Thanks Alie.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We none of us are perfect and we all make mistakes and if we recognise them and try not to repeat them then we are to be forgiven. You may have upset someone with what you have said and this is your way of an apology, I liked the sentiment here in this fine acrostic poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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We none of us are perfect and we all make mistakes and if we recognise them and try not to repeat them then we are to be forgiven. You may have upset someone with what you have said and this is your way of an apology, I liked the sentiment here in this fine acrostic poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Thank you Dolly. I took to much for granted. I took this lady as a friend. Someone that could take criticism in a joking manner. I was wrong when one is good one is good. :)
Comment from Sallyo
Reviews are, on the whole, opinions, and therefore aren't "wrong" unless they state something that is incorrect. This poem sounds specific to FS but I don't know the full story behind it. It works well as a poem, anyway.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Reviews are, on the whole, opinions, and therefore aren't "wrong" unless they state something that is incorrect. This poem sounds specific to FS but I don't know the full story behind it. It works well as a poem, anyway.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Thank you Sally. The only thing I can see that may have been wrong is that I (thinking she a friend) told her Miss Goody Two-shoes and put a little dirt in to her limerick to get a smile. Didn't work out the way I wish. Oh well "que sera sera"
Comment from Cindy Warren
I don't know why people are offended by an honest review. Sometimes I interpret poetry differently than the writer intended, and sometimes the reverse is also true. We can only do our best.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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I don't know why people are offended by an honest review. Sometimes I interpret poetry differently than the writer intended, and sometimes the reverse is also true. We can only do our best.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Thank you Cindy.
