Haiku(spiders spin silken)
Haiku11 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A golden colourful write for autumn and I enjoyed the ambiance here as nature dictates the seasons and we just watch in awe, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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A golden colourful write for autumn and I enjoyed the ambiance here as nature dictates the seasons and we just watch in awe, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
Comment from Heather Knight
What a lovely depiction of autumn!
I love the use of the word russet. It's very beautiful. I also like to swirl down.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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What a lovely depiction of autumn!
I love the use of the word russet. It's very beautiful. I also like to swirl down.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Great review zanya
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have included SO much description in these few syllables. Your poem celebrates the lovely colors of fall. Alliteration is a very effectively
used device.
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You have included SO much description in these few syllables. Your poem celebrates the lovely colors of fall. Alliteration is a very effectively
used device.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Great review zanya
Comment from Janetsue
When I used to have horses, and we were riding through the woods, I always noticed there were more spider webs in the fall season. This posting brings back some wonderful memories of hours of woodland travel. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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When I used to have horses, and we were riding through the woods, I always noticed there were more spider webs in the fall season. This posting brings back some wonderful memories of hours of woodland travel. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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That'wonderful zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Fantastic, just spiders do their job as spin silken threads making their net and make naturally a colourful autumn symphony, their webs appear as russet leaves swirl down; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Fantastic, just spiders do their job as spin silken threads making their net and make naturally a colourful autumn symphony, their webs appear as russet leaves swirl down; well said, well done.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Great review zanya
Comment from moongirlwriter
Awwww I do so love the image of your words in this Haiku. Very nicely done and the image you've chosen could only have been better if it had a spider's web filling the spaces between the leaves. :) Good luck with this writing.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Awwww I do so love the image of your words in this Haiku. Very nicely done and the image you've chosen could only have been better if it had a spider's web filling the spaces between the leaves. :) Good luck with this writing.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Great review zanya
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Comment from Darlene Franklin
the leaves look as though the spidery threads holds them in place, a temporary, fragile support against the wind. Is it a symphony or an al fresco painting?
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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the leaves look as though the spidery threads holds them in place, a temporary, fragile support against the wind. Is it a symphony or an al fresco painting?
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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What a superb review zanya
Comment from humpwhistle
All of those things are true.
But I wish that after I read 'symphony'
I could look back and recognize some musical
references. The first two line suggest nothing musical.
Just my opinion.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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All of those things are true.
But I wish that after I read 'symphony'
I could look back and recognize some musical
references. The first two line suggest nothing musical.
Just my opinion.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thanks for that useful suggestion zanya
Comment from Sugarray77
Zanya, I really like your haiku and love the mental image of russet leaves swirling to the flow and spin of autumn. Well done and a perfect poem for the Haiku contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Zanya, I really like your haiku and love the mental image of russet leaves swirling to the flow and spin of autumn. Well done and a perfect poem for the Haiku contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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And thanks fo r those encouraging words zanya
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned haiku that adheres to all of the rules of form with the exception of the naming convention - should be titled haiku (spiders spin silken). The imagery and kigo shine through loud and clear with a solidly profound satori to complete the package. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned haiku that adheres to all of the rules of form with the exception of the naming convention - should be titled haiku (spiders spin silken). The imagery and kigo shine through loud and clear with a solidly profound satori to complete the package. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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What a superb review zanya
