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Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for taking this opportunity to share your experiences on FanStory. I enjoyed your rhymed couplets in these quatrains and agree with your observations. Oftentimes, I find the low ratings were just a slip of the finger, and usually from a new member. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
    Thank you Joan for your excellent review and for dropping by.

    Yes, I agree with you, "most" of the time it's just a mistake. However, I've experienced several over the years, as I'm sure we all have, that was just down-right mean. LOL

    Have a great weekend Joan...Bill
reply by Joan E. on 18-Oct-2019
    I too have had to mute a few over the years. Have a peaceful weekend and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment from Louise Michelle
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Haha - yes, you can always weed out the newbies by their lower ratings and sometimes asinine comments. I always appreciate constructive criticism, but when someone obviously doesn't know what he/she is talking about, it gets on my nerves.

At any hoot, you did a good job with this poem. The rhythm and rhyme choices made this a fun read. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
    Hello Lou and thanks for your great review, I appreciate you dropping by.

    You know Lou, we've been around here a long time and it's just not fun for me anymore. So many things have changed, it's all the short versions now. Six word poems, 5-7-5's and so on. Do you feel the same or is it just me?

    Well, as you said, at any hoot, you're funny and I really enjoy reading your poems. Hugs right back at you, my friend...Bill
reply by Louise Michelle on 15-Oct-2019
    I don't mind reading the short, shorts when they're done well. You should do what I do - take a break from Fan Story. That's how I've lasted here for so long.
Comment from Lulube
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great descriptions, portraying exactly how I feel as well. To take it a bit further, I get so discouraged when I enter a contest and get no votes, not even one, but I will get a review when I post it, at a 5 or 6 stars. I don't get that at all. I go off and on with the contests and as far as posting a lot of poems every week, I have gotten to a few in a month. This poem of yours has given me a new way to look at everything, I'll just blame it all on the newbies. lol But it's my work that's lacking and no laughing matter. I like your attitude and will look up more of your work.

lulube

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
    Hello Lulube, how are you? Thank you very much for your excellent review, I appreciate it.

    Yes, when you post a new poem or any type of writing the site automatically gives us 2 free reviews and they pay other writers to review our work. Although, I don't know how much they pay. Sometimes those two free reviews can jump to 5 or 10.

    I'm just curious, do you ever promote your work? The more you can promote the more reviews you will get. I discovered a long time ago that if I didn't promote my work no one would ever read it. It's all about how much you can afford to promote as to how many members will read it. In other words, in my opinion, it's all about the money. But, you have to be willing to write a lot of reviews to build promotion money.

    If I can be of any help in any way, just let me know.

    Have a great day my friend...Bill
reply by Lulube on 01-Oct-2019
    I know what you mean, when I first joined, I did nothing but review review, so I could put a good price on my promotion. got lots of blue ribbons, as time has gone on, I have fallen by the wayside and just two and a few good friends who don't care about the 2 cents they will get, is enough for me now. thxs for the offer of help, right back at ya!!

    lulube
Comment from Janetsue
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This is a splendid poem citing many of the feelings other members share. It is clever and to the point. There's no figuring out how some readers interpret something as being negative and misunderstood that is actually very clearly spoken. Your closing couplet is right on target! Best wishes in the rhyming contest!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for your excellent review, I appreciate your kind words.

    I would also like to welcome you to Fanstory, enjoy yourself. If I can be of any help, please let me know.

    Have a great day, my friend...Bill
reply by Janetsue on 26-Sep-2019
    You're truly welcome...and I really appreciate your warmhearted reply. I am enjoying FanStory very much and have been connecting with many creative writers. Smiles and hugs, Janet
Comment from bob cullen
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Sorry not a six, but a good write nonetheless. And my friend, don't worry about the two's. I've read your work before and we both know you are a way better than that.
Keep writing.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
    Hello Bob, how are you? It's good to talk to you again and thanks for your kind words, I do appreciate it.

    I don't write much anymore due to some health issues, but I do still enjoy it.

    Take care of yourself, my friend...Bill
Comment from Willie P. Smith
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Very good and clearly understandable Poem. I received a three from one
reviewer that sounded angry. The same poem received four sixes from other reviewers. I just figure that's the way they see it. Very good.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
    Hello Willie. Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it.

    Yes, that probably happens to every writer on Fanstory, especially to those who promote their work very high up the list. Even though they don't like your piece, instead of pressing "skip" they can't resist the money. So, they give you a bad review, grab your money and run.

    Hang in there Willie and keep writing...Bill
Comment from Gypsymooncat
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I agree with you Cedar, that Fanstory is the best writing Site there is. I've joined a few others, and have ended up keeping Fanstory as my one and only because it has everything a writer needs to post their work, gain reviews/critiques and generally, improve how they write.

I enjoyed your poem because it is a beauty for structure, so no worries there, and I also agree with low ratings being off-putting if they aren't accompanied by constructive comments on how to fix our work. If I get a four that suggests nothing that needs fixing, I ask for it. I'm not worried about not getting empty fives or sixes, I simply want to know those who review my work, enjoy it, or they find things that need adjusting.

Well said and well done!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for your wonderful review, I appreciate it.

    Yes, I agree that Fanstory is the best writing site. Over the years I have tried many writing sites online, but none even comes close to this one.

    In my opinion, I think there are a few members here that joined just to cause trouble by downgrading everyone's work on purpose. I've seen it many times over the years. Eventually, with enough complaints, they are kicked off the site, but many come back using different names.

    Have a great day, my friend...Bill
Comment from kahpot
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Very well written and I must admit I have been overly hard on some reviews I have received (got a one star) while the same work received several sixes, and I agree with you new comers are only giving what they think fit and what they like compared to their own style, this rhyming poem is very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
    Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it.

    Yes, I agree with you. I suppose every writer on Fanstory has the same problem that you have mentioned. If someone reads our work and simply don't like it they should click on "skip" and move on. However, they won't do that, especially if that piece is highly promoted. They would rather give you a low rating and take your promotion money. I don't believe that will ever change.

    Have a great day, my friend...Bill
Comment from Wils
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As much as I can relate to this what I find worse is when people read your work and don't comment.
Even criticism can be helpful as long as it's constructive

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
    Thank you Wils for your excellent review, I appreciate it.

    It's been my experience in the last eleven years here that when most writers open your work it's only to see how much promotion money you have on that piece before they review. If you are not offering enough money to make it worth their time they will move on. Also, each time that piece is opened the counter automatically adds another number to the amount on your "View" total. Therefore, it doesn't mean that they read your work while they were there.

    Have a great day, my friend...Bill
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Thank you for your poem and advise about the reviews. I liked the flowage of your words, especially about Fan Story. I truly feel the same way about the comments. But I've been very satisfied with the ratings on FS. The authors are very helpful.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
    Thank you Rosemary for your excellent review, I appreciate it.

    Yes, I agree, the feedback from other writers is how we learn to become better writers.

    I'd like to wish you a belated welcome to Fanstory. I hope you have a long enjoyable stay...Bill