Tanka(daffodil ballet)
An ekprastic poem30 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
What beautiful artwork as your words describe the ballet of the flowers, very well written and presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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What beautiful artwork as your words describe the ballet of the flowers, very well written and presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your tanka is well-written, lovely, whimsical, and entertaining. It is an excellent response to the artwork and a pleasing mix of figurative and
literal language.
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Your tanka is well-written, lovely, whimsical, and entertaining. It is an excellent response to the artwork and a pleasing mix of figurative and
literal language.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent tanka, The describes your canvass perfectly, friend Pam. The vibrant colours of the flowers of the field, cannot be bested, only captured, Beautifully written, painted and presented. Well done Pam, blessings Roy
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This is an excellent tanka, The describes your canvass perfectly, friend Pam. The vibrant colours of the flowers of the field, cannot be bested, only captured, Beautifully written, painted and presented. Well done Pam, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
Comment from Bichon
A strong, happy summer vibe was one that I got from your poem. You have described the daffodils wonderfully. The photo compliments the poem too! Great job.
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A strong, happy summer vibe was one that I got from your poem. You have described the daffodils wonderfully. The photo compliments the poem too! Great job.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
This is another fine work of art from your fertile imagination, Pam. I enjoy the ballet daffodils and who would've thought them the stems tossing beautiful trumpets into the air that truly could transform into many blossoms.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
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This is another fine work of art from your fertile imagination, Pam. I enjoy the ballet daffodils and who would've thought them the stems tossing beautiful trumpets into the air that truly could transform into many blossoms.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
Comment from lyenochka
Love your imagination, Pamela! I am glad that you can see those fairy ballerinas in the flowers. Flowers are so graceful as are those dancers so both make a perfect combination. I like the forest that is comprised of those long, slender daffodil leaves!
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Love your imagination, Pamela! I am glad that you can see those fairy ballerinas in the flowers. Flowers are so graceful as are those dancers so both make a perfect combination. I like the forest that is comprised of those long, slender daffodil leaves!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Pamusart. This is the epitome of an ekprastic poem. Your words detailed the picture with color and action. Good luck at in the Tanka contest. Well done. Robert
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Hello Pamusart. This is the epitome of an ekprastic poem. Your words detailed the picture with color and action. Good luck at in the Tanka contest. Well done. Robert
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
Comment from jenintorre
Your tanka poem and your artwork is delightful. I Iove the vibrant colours that you've chosen and your little ballerinas are so cute. I hope you are having a good day. Love Jen.
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Your tanka poem and your artwork is delightful. I Iove the vibrant colours that you've chosen and your little ballerinas are so cute. I hope you are having a good day. Love Jen.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
Comment from June Sargent
Very bright and cheerful presentation. The daffodils are long gone here in Massachusetts. The colors we see are autumn oranges and yellows. But, we have somethng to look forward to in the spring: daffodil ballets!
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Very bright and cheerful presentation. The daffodils are long gone here in Massachusetts. The colors we see are autumn oranges and yellows. But, we have somethng to look forward to in the spring: daffodil ballets!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Pam. Charming painting and poem as always. Nicely described. Painting is joyful and exuberant. It's always fun to see what you create. Thanks for sharing. Marilyn
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Hi Pam. Charming painting and poem as always. Nicely described. Painting is joyful and exuberant. It's always fun to see what you create. Thanks for sharing. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
