Crown Of Glory
A tribute to my dear friend.19 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
If I had lovely hair like your friend, I too would not color it! I enjoyed your photograph and One-Line Poem as a salute. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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If I had lovely hair like your friend, I too would not color it! I enjoyed your photograph and One-Line Poem as a salute. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from TallySally
This proves you can say it all in just a few words. Great job.
Congrats on your author and poet ranking. Well deserved.
God bless and my best,
Relda
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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This proves you can say it all in just a few words. Great job.
Congrats on your author and poet ranking. Well deserved.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from Cindy Warren
You're lucky to have such a good friend for so long. I'm glad you like her hair. Mine is starting to turn silvery. Hope there's somone who likes it.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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You're lucky to have such a good friend for so long. I'm glad you like her hair. Mine is starting to turn silvery. Hope there's somone who likes it.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt one-line poem about the crown of glory we received and often hide shamefully because it makes us feel older. Age is only a number and depend on our attitude his young we feel.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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A very well-written heartfelt one-line poem about the crown of glory we received and often hide shamefully because it makes us feel older. Age is only a number and depend on our attitude his young we feel.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
The Bible indeed does talk about snowy white hair being crowning glory. She does have beautiful hair. I like this well written one line work. Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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The Bible indeed does talk about snowy white hair being crowning glory. She does have beautiful hair. I like this well written one line work. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from lyenochka
What a lovely picture, Patricia! She does have great hair! Thanks for sharing and alluding to the Scripture about the "crown of glory" of the white hair. Lately, I'm seeing young kids dying their hair white not just all kinds of colors like before.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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What a lovely picture, Patricia! She does have great hair! Thanks for sharing and alluding to the Scripture about the "crown of glory" of the white hair. Lately, I'm seeing young kids dying their hair white not just all kinds of colors like before.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very well written and very beautiful one line poem about your friend. She looks like a very beautiful and sweet friend. Thank you for sharing this! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Patricia, This is a very well written and very beautiful one line poem about your friend. She looks like a very beautiful and sweet friend. Thank you for sharing this! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A lovely photo and
very nice presentation, Patricia.
-It's nice to pay tribute
to your friend.
-You have written a good
monostich about her, too.
-The imagery is effective
with "snowy white hair."
-The last half makes
an effective ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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-A lovely photo and
very nice presentation, Patricia.
-It's nice to pay tribute
to your friend.
-You have written a good
monostich about her, too.
-The imagery is effective
with "snowy white hair."
-The last half makes
an effective ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Good one-liner to go along with the good writing. Your friend does have some good hair. Sounds like she's a good lady to go along with it. Thanks for sharing! Bill
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Good one-liner to go along with the good writing. Your friend does have some good hair. Sounds like she's a good lady to go along with it. Thanks for sharing! Bill
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review.
