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Death of My Cat 'Spook'

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15 total reviews 
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is a heartbreaking way to lose a pet. You must think of that day often. Until I read your notes I thought the image represented your actual cat. The poem is well written and tells the whole story.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
    Hi Susan Thank you for your review and yes I do think of that day and the image is very much like my Spook I didnt have a pic on my Ipad of my cat i am sure Spook wont mind
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Many of us have lost pets, but few I'm sure have gone through what you experienced that day. Taking a pet to the vet for that last goodbye in no way compares to that terrible happening. Though I am sure it was hard for you to write, you have done a splendid job. God Bless you.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
    Hi Raffaelina Thank you for your review and no it was split second decision but I had no choice as she would not have made it to the Vets anyway to injured However she was peaceful at last and she was loved very much throughout her life This was a difficult write so mauch appreciate your words
Comment from Justin Chopin
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That was a very intense poem especially with the details you added about what you had to do after you saw all of the blood gushing out of your cat. I am glad that you were able to get take all of your grief and turn it into this fantastic piece of poetry. Sorry for your loss.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
    Hi Justin Thank you for reading my poem about my beautiful Spook one of my worst days and I still feel very sad but needed to share in poetry I really appreciate ypir comments
reply by Justin Chopin on 20-Sep-2019
    You're welcome.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I'm so sorry about this. It's very sad and unfortunate to lose a member of the family in this way. It was just a terrible accident. I appreciate you sharing this beautifully written personal story that speaks about a dear lost family member. My condolences and well done!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
    Hi Jeffrey, Thanks so much for reviewing my poem And yes our pets are very much our family and This was very hard to write and your condolences are appreciated. Spook was teffific pet
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Death of 'My Cat Spook', is an exceptionally well-written and heart-wrenching piece. It was a privilege to both read and review a poem of this standard. To me, this is a six, but I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Hi Duchess Thank you for reading my poem it was difficult to write but I have my lovely memories of our dear Spook and I appreciate your comments
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 19-Sep-2019

    Hi Anon,
    You're more than welcome. Spook, looks very much like a cat I had. When they die it's absolutely heart-breaking.
    God bless and take care,
    the Duchess
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Oh, this is so heart-breaking. The same thing happened to me years ago, but it was our adorable little puppy. I cried off and on for days, grieved for a long time. I can't imagine how awful it was for you having to put the pet out of its misery; this was an act of mercy and love. Your poem is VERY well-written and moving.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Hi Janice, Thanks for your review and yes it was a terrible accident and I still cry when I think of the circumstances but to end her suffering was my priority as hard as it was to do it was the right thing No vet could have saved her .I have lovely memories of her being with us for so long
Comment from LisaMay
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What a shocking dilemma for you - to do the worst thing and then the best thing for your much-loved cat. How brave of you to end her pain like that, and how brave of you to revisit that scene through your poem, which captures all the angst of that terrible situation.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Hi Lisa Oh yes it was terrible all round and I still get sad thinking about everything that day but I had her for a long time and that was my bonus I do miss her though Thanks for your review appreciated
Comment from Gail Denham
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What an awful hard thing to do - end your poor cat's suffering. This has happened to us a few times in a less dramatic fashion - when the vet would say "it's time" and they took care of the ending. We still have the ashes of our last dog on top the fridge - my husband loved that dog. But that was maybe four years ago. It might be time.
A good poem - dramatic and passionate.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Hi Gail, Thanks for your review I could not have saved her even a Vet could not her injuries were too awful so the kindest thing was to take her life I cried for days but ai have lovely memories of her and miss her company
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Accidentally your pet cat Spook died under your car, you miss her, every day you look at her grave in your garden; a moving story, well said, well done.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Hi Alcreator Thanks for reviewing my sad poem and I do miss her but have good memories of her 18 years with us I think she was deaf and just couldnt hear the car.
Comment from Patty Palmer
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This must have been terrible for you! And for poor Spook to say the least! My in-laws lived on a farm with lots of cats around and I remember that any time you started your car, we all had to be sure to look to make sure there wasn't a cat under the hood or somewhere they could get hurt.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Hi Patty, Thanks for reading and revoewing my poem and yes it was a horrible day I think Spook was deaf as she was old and just didnt hear the car and to think I rescued her from my sons car wheels 2 weeks prior to me running over her Makes me sad to think about it
reply by Patty Palmer on 19-Sep-2019
    I can imagine how terrible you feel. But chin up she was loved and she knew it!
reply by Patty Palmer on 19-Sep-2019
    I can imagine how terrible you feel. But chin up she was loved and she knew it!