Once Upon a Time
We learn early what the true meaning of friendship is...19 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is really cute. Clever premise. I like how the "king" is her dad, and of course she is the family princess. I also like that TJ can talk to her, and he helps her with things, so they are good for each other. Smart of Mom to see that. :)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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This is really cute. Clever premise. I like how the "king" is her dad, and of course she is the family princess. I also like that TJ can talk to her, and he helps her with things, so they are good for each other. Smart of Mom to see that. :)
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Princess Joelle sends her gratitude, Phyllis, and so do I - thank you!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a complete story beginning with "I voted" and did not go over the appropriate word cunt allotted. The content is cute and clever. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a complete story beginning with "I voted" and did not go over the appropriate word cunt allotted. The content is cute and clever. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Princess Joelle sends her gratitude, Angel, and so do I - thank you!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. Very enjoyable narrative. I particularly like it because it is an eight-year-old telling the story. She did it well. It's a great story and the best part is that Joelle uses "sparkly ink." That's hard to compete with. Excellent story. Robert
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. Very enjoyable narrative. I particularly like it because it is an eight-year-old telling the story. She did it well. It's a great story and the best part is that Joelle uses "sparkly ink." That's hard to compete with. Excellent story. Robert
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Ahhhh, kind sir, Princess Joelle sends her gratitude this morning (and so do I)!! :-)
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Thank you. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cute little story even the knights needs a prince in shining armor to save them aka vote for them. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Cute little story even the knights needs a prince in shining armor to save them aka vote for them. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Princess Joelle sends her gratitude (and so do I)!! ;-)
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, interesting twist and turns 'just like a child would speak, well presented, i like the imaginary princess like personality, it is a very good story and well told as an eight year old, intelligent and smart young character you have created.
Well done and good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Good read, interesting twist and turns 'just like a child would speak, well presented, i like the imaginary princess like personality, it is a very good story and well told as an eight year old, intelligent and smart young character you have created.
Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Wow, Angela!! Thank you so very much for those awesome stars and your wonderful comments!! Princess Joelle sends her sincere gratitude for them as well! ;) :) Have a wonderful day out there! :)
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You're welcome. Thank you for sharing!
Comment from DonandVicki
A charming cute girl indeed, this image is perfect choice to complement your story. Of all the "I voted" stories that I have read, I enjoyed yours the most. Don and Vicki.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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A charming cute girl indeed, this image is perfect choice to complement your story. Of all the "I voted" stories that I have read, I enjoyed yours the most. Don and Vicki.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Princess Joelle sends her gratitude (and so do I)!! ;-)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You will draw many readers in when they see the story is told through a child's perspective, to later find out she is only eight years old. This genre invites the reader to reminisce about how things went for them when they were around eight. I was sent to my room a lot so I could identify with Princess. I'm sure I would be very much like Princess who could see something in TJ that no one else could. I've always rooted for the underdog. Probably because I was one and knew how terrible it felt. You may draw some similar reflections from the readers. It's some of these uncomfortable experiences which inspire. My books Be Wee With Bea 1&2 address the longterm effects of being bullied and how we work to triumph. This is a very good topic with the word count regulation you did very well.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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You will draw many readers in when they see the story is told through a child's perspective, to later find out she is only eight years old. This genre invites the reader to reminisce about how things went for them when they were around eight. I was sent to my room a lot so I could identify with Princess. I'm sure I would be very much like Princess who could see something in TJ that no one else could. I've always rooted for the underdog. Probably because I was one and knew how terrible it felt. You may draw some similar reflections from the readers. It's some of these uncomfortable experiences which inspire. My books Be Wee With Bea 1&2 address the longterm effects of being bullied and how we work to triumph. This is a very good topic with the word count regulation you did very well.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Wow, Liz, what a wonderful review!! I am so very glad you found what I was trying to do with this story... and to be compared with sweet Bea? What an honor!! Thank you for this lovely and detailed review -- it means a lot to me, ma'am -- here's wishing you (and Bea, Sweet Puppy, and the whole gang!!) an awesome conclusion to the week! ;)
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a nice story and I vote for Princess Joelle even if she did forge he ballot for TJ. Image is perfect for your story. Best of luck in the contest for this enjoyable read. Marilyn
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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This is a nice story and I vote for Princess Joelle even if she did forge he ballot for TJ. Image is perfect for your story. Best of luck in the contest for this enjoyable read. Marilyn
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Princess Joelle sends her gratitude (and so do I) -- lol!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author, from the perspective of the 8 year old girl. She tell sit just like it is. She doesn't see TJ as 'different' just as he doesn't see her 'different.' This is a great lesson that all can learn from. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Admiration. Jan
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author, from the perspective of the 8 year old girl. She tell sit just like it is. She doesn't see TJ as 'different' just as he doesn't see her 'different.' This is a great lesson that all can learn from. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Admiration. Jan
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Princess Joelle sends her gratitude (and so do I) -- lol!
