O Beautiful Morning
The daily miracle of sunrise.9 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
Well, I certainly appreciated this poem since I'm having a very cloudy morning here.
The image is lovely and you paired your words well. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Well, I certainly appreciated this poem since I'm having a very cloudy morning here.
The image is lovely and you paired your words well. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review. Stay dry!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lovely poem conveys a moving theme. The morning time is special. There's nothing quite like a morning walk. Morning means God has allowed us to be here another day--with a purpose.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Your lovely poem conveys a moving theme. The morning time is special. There's nothing quite like a morning walk. Morning means God has allowed us to be here another day--with a purpose.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your comments and review.
Comment from Aiona
I love rhyming poems, and this one fits the bill. I love the choice of picture and the imagery - indeed many sunrises kind of shine, especially on the water. I didn't see any typos.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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I love rhyming poems, and this one fits the bill. I love the choice of picture and the imagery - indeed many sunrises kind of shine, especially on the water. I didn't see any typos.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review and kind six star rating.
Comment from LisaMay
How nice for you to have that morning view in your backyard.
I enjoyed the simplicity of your poem in the 'now' of morning, when all is beautiful - the storm and loss can wait until the afternoon.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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How nice for you to have that morning view in your backyard.
I enjoyed the simplicity of your poem in the 'now' of morning, when all is beautiful - the storm and loss can wait until the afternoon.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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It makes me happy. So does your review. Thank you.
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:)))
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the beautiful morning when the sun rises we start a wonderful new day with colorful hues and shimmery gleams on the water.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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A very well-written poem about the beautiful morning when the sun rises we start a wonderful new day with colorful hues and shimmery gleams on the water.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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A beautiful review too. Thank you.
Comment from Susan Larson
Oh, my gosh! This poem actually makes me want to love morning and do something more productive with it than sip three cups of coffee while I read my e-mails in bed. This could be life changing for me. If I still had a six, it would be yours!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Oh, my gosh! This poem actually makes me want to love morning and do something more productive with it than sip three cups of coffee while I read my e-mails in bed. This could be life changing for me. If I still had a six, it would be yours!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your exciting review.
Comment from JLR
Good photo, nice melodic poetic feel. Meet the contest rules and developed a good entry for the rhythm ingredient required. Good luck, write on and write often.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Good photo, nice melodic poetic feel. Meet the contest rules and developed a good entry for the rhythm ingredient required. Good luck, write on and write often.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
looking at your picture shows the summer-like sunrise and the silent bay sitting still. By looking at the picture it appears relaxing. Today we are experiencing rather warm temps; kind of feels like summer.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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looking at your picture shows the summer-like sunrise and the silent bay sitting still. By looking at the picture it appears relaxing. Today we are experiencing rather warm temps; kind of feels like summer.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review. Photo of my backyard lake view.
Comment from papa55mike
This is a very well-written poem and I love the picture. It gives the water the copper glow. Try your next poem on the Advanced Editor on your writing page. It's fun to play with all the fonts.
Best of luck!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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This is a very well-written poem and I love the picture. It gives the water the copper glow. Try your next poem on the Advanced Editor on your writing page. It's fun to play with all the fonts.
Best of luck!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your comments, suggestion and review. The photo is my backyard. 🤗
