Memories of You
Love has never departed it is still in our heart.12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Memories of You, has the allowable configuration with twenty-five syllables and a great send up for Mom. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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This naani, Memories of You, has the allowable configuration with twenty-five syllables and a great send up for Mom. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you Bill. I carry her in my heart always.
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is a sweet poem and tribute to your mother. I am sorry that she is no longer with you. You must have had a wonderful relationship.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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That is a sweet poem and tribute to your mother. I am sorry that she is no longer with you. You must have had a wonderful relationship.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you Mia. At the age of 11 I lost her to a nervous breakdown. She passed away at age 52 I'm older than her but I still miss her. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Sylvia Page
When true love resides, your words have great meaning and come true...
"Love has never departed it is still in our heart." Your naani is great and fulfils it's requirement. Wishing you the best
Sylvia
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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When true love resides, your words have great meaning and come true...
"Love has never departed it is still in our heart." Your naani is great and fulfils it's requirement. Wishing you the best
Sylvia
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you Silvia. Those we love will always be in our heart. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
So touching! Of course I should have guessed, having four boys who do not and have never spared their love. Sons are wonderfully loyal and loving. This tribute to your mom is priceless. If I had six they would be yours.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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So touching! Of course I should have guessed, having four boys who do not and have never spared their love. Sons are wonderfully loyal and loving. This tribute to your mom is priceless. If I had six they would be yours.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you Raffaelina. Yes, mothers are our heart. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani about memories of a loved one who is not with us anymore. Each memory brings us closer to feel them still within our hearts.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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A very well-written Naani about memories of a loved one who is not with us anymore. Each memory brings us closer to feel them still within our hearts.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you Sandra. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a structurally sound Naani. The content is a bit like reading prose rather than poetry, but then, so does the example they provided. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a structurally sound Naani. The content is a bit like reading prose rather than poetry, but then, so does the example they provided. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you Mystic. I just wanted to write something about someone I loved. I hope you enjoyed it. :)
Comment from Susan Larson
I totally agree, love lasts forever. But the God is Love. Love is what binds us together for all eternity. Love is what keeps those who have gone before us alive in our hearts and in our minds. Very nice, especially in that this was for your mother. I wish I could say that of my mother, but I do feel this with my two sons.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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I totally agree, love lasts forever. But the God is Love. Love is what binds us together for all eternity. Love is what keeps those who have gone before us alive in our hearts and in our minds. Very nice, especially in that this was for your mother. I wish I could say that of my mother, but I do feel this with my two sons.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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I agree with you Susan. God is Love and it is He who keeps us together. I'm sorry to see you missed a mother's love, but through your sons you feel it.
Comment from Darkhorse555
the heart is a powerful vessel, it holds so much inside diamond memories, your pen held this star as your soul's guiding light very beautifully painted
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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the heart is a powerful vessel, it holds so much inside diamond memories, your pen held this star as your soul's guiding light very beautifully painted
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
a mom's love is hard to replace. They care for you before birth and after. When they die, they are like an angel sent down from above. They are with you at all times.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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a mom's love is hard to replace. They care for you before birth and after. When they die, they are like an angel sent down from above. They are with you at all times.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you Rosemary. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You still love her, she is your first love, she smiles at you from high up, from the stars, you wished meeting her upon stars, you carry godsend memories about your mom; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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You still love her, she is your first love, she smiles at you from high up, from the stars, you wished meeting her upon stars, you carry godsend memories about your mom; well said, well done.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you Al. We all love she who brought us to this world. Glad you liked it.
