Celebrate Life
Love everyday as if is your very your last..31 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one continuous
thought is effective, along
with rhyme, too.
-A good topic and message.
-It is important to celebrate
life, and not take what
we have for granted.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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-Very nice artwork.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one continuous
thought is effective, along
with rhyme, too.
-A good topic and message.
-It is important to celebrate
life, and not take what
we have for granted.
-Good luck in the contest.
-
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank much, it is fun to experiment with new styles.
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You are very welcome.
