Celebrate Life
Love everyday as if is your very your last..31 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
Spending more time in the present, what a wonderful message to put out there. We don't enjoy life enough and that is a shame.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Spending more time in the present, what a wonderful message to put out there. We don't enjoy life enough and that is a shame.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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My sincere thank you. Mia you nailed it...we don?t as a rule spend adequate time living fully in the moment.
Comment from Ogden
That's excellent advice for young and old, come what may, preferably without dying today. Besides, living it up is good for the economy.
:o)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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That's excellent advice for young and old, come what may, preferably without dying today. Besides, living it up is good for the economy.
:o)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thanks yes we need to spend it, albeit, wisely. They say we can?t take it with us.LOL
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Yes, that's what they say, and they're probably right. (Hey, if we've played our cards right, maybe they'll have all the good stuff up there for us.)
Don
Comment from Raul1
This poem has a chance of winning the contest! I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Nice work.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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This poem has a chance of winning the contest! I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Nice work.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you!
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You're welcome! :)
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, creative and have a great message.
The reader pondered on the words of this poem. Life is a gift -
and living every moment is key. The artwork is perfect and compliments
both theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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The author's words are clear, creative and have a great message.
The reader pondered on the words of this poem. Life is a gift -
and living every moment is key. The artwork is perfect and compliments
both theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you sincerely.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, as everyday is a celebration and we should make the most of that time, enjoy and be thankful, very well presented short poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Excellent, as everyday is a celebration and we should make the most of that time, enjoy and be thankful, very well presented short poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review and glad wishes.
Comment from Susan X Smith
The poem is true to the required format (a new one for me.) The rhyme of the last two lines does add something and the message is upbeat. Also, the fireworks display emphasized the theme of celebration.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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The poem is true to the required format (a new one for me.) The rhyme of the last two lines does add something and the message is upbeat. Also, the fireworks display emphasized the theme of celebration.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you Susan....new for me as well.
Comment from Bichon
Such a true poem. Sometimes we need to leave the worries at the door, even if it is hard, and just celebrate the feeling of living for a while, a wonderful thing to do.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Such a true poem. Sometimes we need to leave the worries at the door, even if it is hard, and just celebrate the feeling of living for a while, a wonderful thing to do.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thanks and yes we need to celebrate just this present moment....
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A great poem and some excellent advice. I know someone who lives in the past. All she talks about are things she experienced years ago. Meanwhile, she's missing everything that is happening now.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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A great poem and some excellent advice. I know someone who lives in the past. All she talks about are things she experienced years ago. Meanwhile, she's missing everything that is happening now.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thanks Thomas, I will hold your friend on my heart to see that the present moment is where life matters.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with your words, never miss a moment in life as we never know when it is all over! I say this to my children all the time when they become complacent, I enjoyed your uplifting words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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I so agree with your words, never miss a moment in life as we never know when it is all over! I say this to my children all the time when they become complacent, I enjoyed your uplifting words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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We can never lift others up often enough.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. You've done a fine job assembling a Naani poem. The text of your poem encourages us to make the best of every moment because the only moment that's guaranteed is the one we have now. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. You've done a fine job assembling a Naani poem. The text of your poem encourages us to make the best of every moment because the only moment that's guaranteed is the one we have now. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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My sincere thanks.
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You're welcome!
