Dawn's Valiant Knight
A '5-7-5' Contest Offering15 total reviews
Comment from Nancy Slover
This 5-7-5 poem is outstanding! Just so descriptive of sunrise in a surprising way. I love reading and rereading it. Best of luck in the contest. I think you have a winner!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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This 5-7-5 poem is outstanding! Just so descriptive of sunrise in a surprising way. I love reading and rereading it. Best of luck in the contest. I think you have a winner!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Wow, Nancy! What a bright shiny sight to wake up to this morning -- thank you so very much for your awesome comments and those lovely stars!! Here's sending wishes to you that the sun shines brightly on your morning and the rest of the week!!
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You are most welcome and deserving!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a unique take on daybreak and the picture highlights the poem in a dramatic way. Your words are well chosen, such as "slices notches." Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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This is a unique take on daybreak and the picture highlights the poem in a dramatic way. Your words are well chosen, such as "slices notches." Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for your great review!!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very well written 5-7-5 and the image to accompany is amazing. You've described it well, too. I like the alliteration of "s" and stresses of the "s" sound. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 and the image to accompany is amazing. You've described it well, too. I like the alliteration of "s" and stresses of the "s" sound. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thanx bunches for your great review!!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A very beautiful story in a poem:"Sunlight 's lucent sword slices notches in night's shield..." this is a very plastic image that shows the beauty of the two elements night and day, and how they exchange places. Good luck with the contest and thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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A very beautiful story in a poem:"Sunlight 's lucent sword slices notches in night's shield..." this is a very plastic image that shows the beauty of the two elements night and day, and how they exchange places. Good luck with the contest and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thanx bunches for your great review!!
Comment from Cheryl I
This is a nice entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. I like your use of words, the sun's sword slicing the shield of darkness. I wish you a lot of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This is a nice entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. I like your use of words, the sun's sword slicing the shield of darkness. I wish you a lot of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thanks bunches for your review!!
