Dawn's Valiant Knight
A '5-7-5' Contest Offering15 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
Setting morning free - an interesting thought really. A day dawning with brilliant sun is a good day. Right now we're having rain. It's amazing how quickly constant rain brings the spirits down. I like your poem
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Setting morning free - an interesting thought really. A day dawning with brilliant sun is a good day. Right now we're having rain. It's amazing how quickly constant rain brings the spirits down. I like your poem
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thanx for the review, Gail -- much appreciated, ma'am! ;) Have a great evening! ;) Yvette
Comment from June Sargent
Some great imagery here - morning being set free from the clutches of night by a valiant knight. Swords of sunlight cutting through the forest maintains the theme of a knight in battle. Very creatively done in a few short lines. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Some great imagery here - morning being set free from the clutches of night by a valiant knight. Swords of sunlight cutting through the forest maintains the theme of a knight in battle. Very creatively done in a few short lines. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review -- so glad you enjoyed the sun riding in to rescue our dawn!!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. This is a brilliant and well thought out way to describe the transition from night to morning. I love the clever and colorful wording you use. I enjoyed reading this superbly written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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I like this. This is a brilliant and well thought out way to describe the transition from night to morning. I love the clever and colorful wording you use. I enjoyed reading this superbly written work. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Ahhh...so glad the morning Knight made you smile! Thank you, Jeffrey, for your review!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an imaginative write filled with eloquent metaphors and soothing promises of dawns fresh light, much enjoyed and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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This is an imaginative write filled with eloquent metaphors and soothing promises of dawns fresh light, much enjoyed and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Ahhh...so glad the morning Knight made you smile! Thank you!!
Comment from LisaMay
My hero! Dawn's valiant knight steps lightly to free the morning from her dark bonds. I love the imagery you have used here - it is most creative. I think I have just reviewed the winning entry.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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My hero! Dawn's valiant knight steps lightly to free the morning from her dark bonds. I love the imagery you have used here - it is most creative. I think I have just reviewed the winning entry.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Oh, thank you so much!! This is such a wonderful review! Those stars are lovely and your words mean a lot to me!!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. Your 5-7-5 certainly conforms to the rules. Your verse reflects the image seen in the picture. That's very well done because looking at the picture brings the words to life. Good luck in the contest. Robert
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. Your 5-7-5 certainly conforms to the rules. Your verse reflects the image seen in the picture. That's very well done because looking at the picture brings the words to life. Good luck in the contest. Robert
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for this great review!!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 about the sun rays shining through the trees like the knights sword that sets the morning free from dark night and the dawn brings light again.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 about the sun rays shining through the trees like the knights sword that sets the morning free from dark night and the dawn brings light again.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for your great review!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all syllables is this vividly descriptive
rendering of sunrise. The metaphorical presentation is superb, and the artwork is lovely.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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You have made excellent use of all syllables is this vividly descriptive
rendering of sunrise. The metaphorical presentation is superb, and the artwork is lovely.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for this great review!!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, Yvette!
Your 5/7/5 is masterful. Filled with vivid visual imagery. The personification works so well and creates a stellar image for the reader.
I so enjoyed reading this offering!
Thank you!
diane
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Good Morning, Yvette!
Your 5/7/5 is masterful. Filled with vivid visual imagery. The personification works so well and creates a stellar image for the reader.
I so enjoyed reading this offering!
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Wow!! And how did you know this was me....? LOL! Those stars are just lovely, Lady Di -- glad you enjoyed my 'gladiator' look at the sunrise! ;) :) Have a great day, my wonderful friend -- I'm off to P-T and then I've got that math workshop this afternoon... :) ;) Take care! ;)
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Yikes!
Must have written this review after I wrote to you yesterday morning! You were on my mind!
Old age... :)
Comment from Sallyo
Very beautiful piece and the complementary picture makes it even more pointed. (Yes, pun intended.) I like the use of an unusual word in the first line... it makes it stand out.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Very beautiful piece and the complementary picture makes it even more pointed. (Yes, pun intended.) I like the use of an unusual word in the first line... it makes it stand out.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for this great review!!
