Good Friends with Flair
When fashion isn't exactly a choice...39 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Yvette. I love writes about animals and the conversation between Zee and Raffe about the outfits worn to the grand opening. Unique and fun little story. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Hi Yvette. I love writes about animals and the conversation between Zee and Raffe about the outfits worn to the grand opening. Unique and fun little story. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thanx for your review on this one, ma'am -- just a much needed smile when I got home: glad Raffe and Zee made you smile! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from DonandVicki
Ok, you had me. I thought that, at the beginning of your story that these characters were at the Academy Awards...Not the zoo. A good flash fiction well executed.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Ok, you had me. I thought that, at the beginning of your story that these characters were at the Academy Awards...Not the zoo. A good flash fiction well executed.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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LOL! Hooray - I'm betting it was their swag that covered it well, yeah? LOL! LOL! So glad you enjoyed this one -- 'twas just a quick write after arriving home this evening! ;) :) I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with Zee and Raffe but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care out there and have a great week! ;) :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Are the guys like football players or are they gong to prime? The story is intriguing enough to presume both scenarios. Good with the contest and with your writing.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Are the guys like football players or are they gong to prime? The story is intriguing enough to presume both scenarios. Good with the contest and with your writing.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed Raffe and Zee, Iza -- 'twas just a quick write after arriving home this evening! ;) :) I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with them but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care out there and have a great week! ;) :)
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Awesome, so the inspiration strike home:)
Comment from damommy
This is so cute with Zee and Raffe getting ready for opening day. I had no idea about the names until I got to the end. I guess you know this is reminiscent of the movie 'Madagascar,' one of my favorites. lol
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This is so cute with Zee and Raffe getting ready for opening day. I had no idea about the names until I got to the end. I guess you know this is reminiscent of the movie 'Madagascar,' one of my favorites. lol
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed, Yvonne -- 'twas just a quick write after arriving home this evening! ;) :) I've seen parts of that movie, but did not get to see the beginning or big chunks in-between... :) ;) I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with Zee and Raffe here, but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care out there and have a great week! ;) :)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Yvette. I will identify with Zee. lol I don't always groom on the fence but I will think about trying. Looking aloof is very hard for me. No one believes me when I try. Oh Well. Good luck in the contest. You're up against the tapeworm. lolol Z
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Hey Yvette. I will identify with Zee. lol I don't always groom on the fence but I will think about trying. Looking aloof is very hard for me. No one believes me when I try. Oh Well. Good luck in the contest. You're up against the tapeworm. lolol Z
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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LOL! You know, I thought about you as I came up with a nickname for the zebra as this whole thing was just a quick write after arriving home this evening! ;) :) I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with Zee and Raffe but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care and have a great week, Z! ;) :)
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Thanks Yvette.
Comment from Debbie Pope
You are looking sharp with this one, Vet (Sorry, I couldn't think of a better one). I was wondering about the funny names, but never guessed what this was about. Flash fiction ideas are hard to come by. Yours are always so clever.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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You are looking sharp with this one, Vet (Sorry, I couldn't think of a better one). I was wondering about the funny names, but never guessed what this was about. Flash fiction ideas are hard to come by. Yours are always so clever.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed, MQ -- 'twas just a quick write after arriving home this evening -- I just didn't have my usual 'swag' on, I guess (it happens...and it was Monday)! ;) :) I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with Zee and Raffe but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care out there and have a great week! ;) :)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is hilarious. It reminds me of one of my favorite movies, "Madagascar" and anything related. I think the last line is clever. I think it has a wide audience appeal. Thank you for posting! Are you doing a whole book with these characters, by chance?
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This is hilarious. It reminds me of one of my favorite movies, "Madagascar" and anything related. I think the last line is clever. I think it has a wide audience appeal. Thank you for posting! Are you doing a whole book with these characters, by chance?
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed, Crystie -- 'twas just a quick write after arriving home this evening! ;) :) I've seen parts of that movie, but did not get to see the beginning or big chunks in-between... :) ;) I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with Zee and Raffe here, but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care out there and have a great week! ;) :)
Comment from JudyE
This is a great entry for the 80-word flash fiction contest. You had me reeled in, hook, line and sinker. Pin-stripes indeed! And I think somewhere in the dim, dark ages there is a saying about never trusting a man in a brown suit. Not sure if that applies to giraffes though. Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This is a great entry for the 80-word flash fiction contest. You had me reeled in, hook, line and sinker. Pin-stripes indeed! And I think somewhere in the dim, dark ages there is a saying about never trusting a man in a brown suit. Not sure if that applies to giraffes though. Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed, Lady J -- 'twas just a quick write after arriving home this evening! ;) :) I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with Zee and Raffe but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care out there and have a great week! ;) :)
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL. Good heavens, stop it. You are taxing my strained brain already! HAHAHAHAHA! Would you believe I didn't get it at first? I thought the friends and fans were.. Oh never mind. (LOL) This made it click "Better than your whole brown-beige motif!" when combined with the last paragraph.
Duh... I better go back to bed. (Hahahaha!)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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LOL. Good heavens, stop it. You are taxing my strained brain already! HAHAHAHAHA! Would you believe I didn't get it at first? I thought the friends and fans were.. Oh never mind. (LOL) This made it click "Better than your whole brown-beige motif!" when combined with the last paragraph.
Duh... I better go back to bed. (Hahahaha!)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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LOL!! Gotta keep you on your toes, you know!! It's a job left up to me and Miss Priss, you know! :) This was just a quick write after arriving home this evening -- I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with Zee and Raffe but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care up there, Lady Dawn, and have a great week! ;) :)
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Hahahahaha!
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You have a great week too. :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This lively little piece is delightful! The well-written dialogue makes the piece all the more fun. If they could talk (They can't, can they?!), I'll bet they would say these things! Very creative, Yvette
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This lively little piece is delightful! The well-written dialogue makes the piece all the more fun. If they could talk (They can't, can they?!), I'll bet they would say these things! Very creative, Yvette
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Oh, I'm so very glad you enjoyed, Janice -- 'twas just a quick write after arriving home this evening! ;) :) I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with Zee and Raffe but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care out there and have a great week! ;) :)
