Good Friends with Flair
When fashion isn't exactly a choice...39 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
And fun it was to read, "and stuck out his tongue" this should have but didn't alert me though the ending did and definitely made me smile, a wonderful short work, very well done and best wishes for the contest-sorry I'm a bit behind this week with everything****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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And fun it was to read, "and stuck out his tongue" this should have but didn't alert me though the ending did and definitely made me smile, a wonderful short work, very well done and best wishes for the contest-sorry I'm a bit behind this week with everything****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thanx for the review, sir -- glad Zee and Raffe could entertain! ;) ;) They were a fun write! ;) And do not worry about the late.... not a worry at all -- I'm still a few 'screens' back from being caught up... still got grading to finish first...but I'll get there (so will you!)! :) Take care and have a great week! ;)
Comment from Gail Denham
Whether well dressed or not, those critters always gain an audience - and they're cute. Interesting are the crosses between zebra and some other animal - can't remember how that worked.
Anyway - cute story.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Whether well dressed or not, those critters always gain an audience - and they're cute. Interesting are the crosses between zebra and some other animal - can't remember how that worked.
Anyway - cute story.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thanx for your review, Gail -- Raffe and Zee send their best! ;) Yvette
Comment from robyn corum
Yvette,
Well, these two sound like smart folk. They're right. They can do pretty much anything -- orrrr NOTHING, actually -- and we stupid humans will just stand and stare - entranced. We're very easily amused. hahaha
Fun! Thanks!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Yvette,
Well, these two sound like smart folk. They're right. They can do pretty much anything -- orrrr NOTHING, actually -- and we stupid humans will just stand and stare - entranced. We're very easily amused. hahaha
Fun! Thanks!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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LOL! Thanx so much for your review, Robyn -- glad you enjoyed Zee and Raffe! ;) Take care, ma'am! Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, Yvette.
-I like the title and the story.
-Good names, too!
-They interact very well
and I like the beginning
when they talk about their outfits:)
-Good reaction by Raffe-
even Zee liked it.
-The ending is good, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation, Yvette.
-I like the title and the story.
-Good names, too!
-They interact very well
and I like the beginning
when they talk about their outfits:)
-Good reaction by Raffe-
even Zee liked it.
-The ending is good, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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LOL! Thanx so much for your review, Pam -- glad you enjoyed Zee and Raffe! ;) Take care, ma'am! Yvette
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You are welcome, Yvette. You know you could make a collection of these and publish them for children:)
Comment from Heather Knight
Cool story...So they were wearing their everyday suits after all!
I like the fact that your characters are animals.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Cool story...So they were wearing their everyday suits after all!
I like the fact that your characters are animals.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your review, Maria -- much appreciated, ma'am! ;) Have a great evening over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Carla Trinklein
Ha ha! I never thought about zebras and giraffes worrying about what they wear for opening day at the zoo! A clever story with an ending I didn't see coming. You made me chuckle!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Ha ha! I never thought about zebras and giraffes worrying about what they wear for opening day at the zoo! A clever story with an ending I didn't see coming. You made me chuckle!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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LOL! Glad you enjoyed my 'stress relief' after a long Monday..... :) Zee and Raffe send along their thanx -- take care, Lady C!! ;) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
Hello Dearie! I got here! At least for a little while... I'm so glad that I clicked on this little gem! I wish you'd asked me for a picture, I may just have one with both in one paddock... maybe not but I think they may just be together at the Columbus Zoo. They have a beautiful African Plains exhibit there. That's a great zoo. This is a really fun flash! Good luck in the contest! (You don't need it... you'll probably walk away with the number 1 spot hands down!) ;)
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hello Dearie! I got here! At least for a little while... I'm so glad that I clicked on this little gem! I wish you'd asked me for a picture, I may just have one with both in one paddock... maybe not but I think they may just be together at the Columbus Zoo. They have a beautiful African Plains exhibit there. That's a great zoo. This is a really fun flash! Good luck in the contest! (You don't need it... you'll probably walk away with the number 1 spot hands down!) ;)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Naaaahh... purposefully went with the 'generic' to maybe not give it away too soon - LOL! ;) It really wasn't my 'usual', but it was a little 'stress relief' after a kindof long Monday.... not bad, just needed a little 'crazy', I think!! ;) :) Thanx so much for dropping in -- I'm off to P-T and then I've got that lovely math workshop this afternoon... :) :) :/ You take care up there and I'll touch base soon... :) ;) Yvette
Comment from karenina
LOVE the names! I'd never have thought of nicknaming the animals so cleverly! This is exactly as advertised in your authors notes...a bit of early week sunshine to make us smile! What's not to love about that?--Karenina
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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LOVE the names! I'd never have thought of nicknaming the animals so cleverly! This is exactly as advertised in your authors notes...a bit of early week sunshine to make us smile! What's not to love about that?--Karenina
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Oh, I'm so glad you don't mind a little crazy now and then, Karenina -- and this was just a quick 'crazy' write after arriving home yesterday evening! ;) :) I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with Zee and Raffe but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care out there and have a great week! ;) :)
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I hear ya! Eight words makes a writer put the brakes on REAL fast!--Karenina
Comment from Janetsue
LOL Thus is so cute...I don't get to the zoo often, but you've mentioned two of my favorite animals. (Our zoo also has a carousel so I get my 'horse fix' while I'm there, too.) Best wishes, my friend, in the 80 word flash fiction contest!!!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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LOL Thus is so cute...I don't get to the zoo often, but you've mentioned two of my favorite animals. (Our zoo also has a carousel so I get my 'horse fix' while I'm there, too.) Best wishes, my friend, in the 80 word flash fiction contest!!!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much, Janet, so glad you don't mind a little crazy now and then -- and this was just a quick 'crazy' write after arriving home yesterday evening! ;) :) I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with Zee and Raffe but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care out there and have a great week! ;) :)
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You're truly welcome, Yvette!!
Comment from Scarbrems
Ha ha, love it and I honestly didn't click until the end. What fun. A playful piece that should do well in the contest. I'm sure Raffe and Zee both looked very smart.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Ha ha, love it and I honestly didn't click until the end. What fun. A playful piece that should do well in the contest. I'm sure Raffe and Zee both looked very smart.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thanx, my Lady Emma, so glad you don't mind a little crazy now and then -- and this was just a quick 'crazy' write after arriving home yesterday evening! ;) :) I had originally wanted to do a leopard and a lion with Zee and Raffe but 80 words would not allow...LOL! :) Take care out there and have a great week! ;) :)
