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A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.

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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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I would have settled for at least one black cat :), yet I find no cats, no prose, no poetry ~sigh~ all I have is a blank space to fill my wordless heart. Maybe later there will be something more to fill it.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
    Thanks,
    I was actually writing this on bus coming back from Atlantic City to where I'm living in Tuckerton and it is completed and you will be shocked!
    Ricky
Comment from Raul1
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I found this boring. I never liked it at all. You could have written the exact poem. It only says the black cat. What is so interesting about that? Write something better and complete the poem. This needs lots of work.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
    Completed.
    Writing on a bus that hard to type while moving.
    Doctor Ricky 1024