crow's feet versus smile lines
5-7-5 (crow's feet wrinkles show)5 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
She can keep her laughing life wrinkles of time. They probably look better on her than on me. Lolz but true. Your L-word alliterations work together nicely. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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She can keep her laughing life wrinkles of time. They probably look better on her than on me. Lolz but true. Your L-word alliterations work together nicely. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your good review was not representative of the actual vote in the contest. Que sera, sera. Regardless, I had fun composing the same.
Mark
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Yes, I agree! We will call them laugh lines and hold them dear for all the precious memories attached to them. No one can take those memories away. This is an awesome entry for this contest! good luck! xoxo
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Yes, I agree! We will call them laugh lines and hold them dear for all the precious memories attached to them. No one can take those memories away. This is an awesome entry for this contest! good luck! xoxo
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thanks Diana for your enthusiasm for my laugh lines. I am smiling about your comments and stars.
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xoxoxo!!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a well penned 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count. The content will speak to many and the light touch of alliteration adds spice to the overall tone. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a well penned 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count. The content will speak to many and the light touch of alliteration adds spice to the overall tone. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your review, comments, and support for this contest entry.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
And tell the happier side of the tales hidden there! ;) Such a wonderful offering today -- thanx so very much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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And tell the happier side of the tales hidden there! ;) Such a wonderful offering today -- thanx so very much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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THANKS for your review, comments, and support for this contest entry Yvette!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this 5-7-5 poem, a message for life is depicted well, wrinkles speak many stages of life one had, but laugh lines always look nicer, laughter makes a healthy living; well said, well done. Thanks for sharing; liked your excellent work; enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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In this 5-7-5 poem, a message for life is depicted well, wrinkles speak many stages of life one had, but laugh lines always look nicer, laughter makes a healthy living; well said, well done. Thanks for sharing; liked your excellent work; enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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THANKS for your review, comments, and support for this contest entry.
