5-7-5 (compulsive typist)
POTUS tweeting3 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
I like Banksy's sense of humor. I'm glad he's not stuck on that graffiti-style too. Good summary of a political and social message on the art scene. Good alliterations with person-posts and typist-tweets. Nice work.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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I like Banksy's sense of humor. I'm glad he's not stuck on that graffiti-style too. Good summary of a political and social message on the art scene. Good alliterations with person-posts and typist-tweets. Nice work.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thanks Sunni!
I like your comments for my political message for today. I have posted other 5-7-5s poking at POTUS. IMHO, he is an easy character to give a jab or two (-; I try consciously to slip in letter-alliterations in my posts.
Mark
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I think there are two or three messages going on here with the art choice and the 5-7-5. I am going to guess orange refers to the POTUS hair color. It seems monkeys are a good animal to demonstrate dissatisfaction with things like tweeting and Brexit. It is intriguing how even one word change makes a difference.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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I think there are two or three messages going on here with the art choice and the 5-7-5. I am going to guess orange refers to the POTUS hair color. It seems monkeys are a good animal to demonstrate dissatisfaction with things like tweeting and Brexit. It is intriguing how even one word change makes a difference.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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you are correct about the allusion to POTUS - I didn't want to use 'ape man' in my verse
thanks for your comments and stars
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you are correct about the allusion to POTUS - I didn't want to use 'ape man' in my verse
thanks for your comments and stars
Comment from LisaMay
How prophetic of Banksy... artists and poets often are, because they have imagination.
I find your poem sickening. Not because you have written it poorly but because the subject makes me squirm with objection and you have written a terrible fact that seems inescapable.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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How prophetic of Banksy... artists and poets often are, because they have imagination.
I find your poem sickening. Not because you have written it poorly but because the subject makes me squirm with objection and you have written a terrible fact that seems inescapable.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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please take it as a satirical commentary - I had no intention to make you squirm
the reference is from Trump's speech about how a certain light makes him look orange
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The man can't help but be a satire of himself. I wish the orange glow would ignite and consign him to hell.
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Now I AM on the same page with you!
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I cannot understand how anyone can be on a different page. That man is a horror story.
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please take it as a satirical commentary - I had no intention to make you squirm
the reference is from Trump's speech about how a certain light makes him look orange
