Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely as you tell a complete story beginning with the appropriate opening statement in the word count allotted. You have a small typo:
"as the realization hid him forcefully." - should be 'hit' him.
Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019

Thanks for the review and heads up. I fixed that line. Yeah, what a terrible feeling to realize that this time.... you really screwed up. sigh. Cheers.

Comment from moongirlwriter

Excellent

Yikes. . .the choices we make in life. Thank goodness most all of us grow up without anything like this happening to them or to others because of our choices. I think changing our laws has helped detur many, it sure did me. Being responsible for another person's demise has got to be difficult to live with and life-changing in itself. Nice writing.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019

Thanks for the insightful review. I know, how much easier is it to call a cab to take you safely home?
Apparently, texting and driving causes more deaths than drunk driving these days. I always wonder what is sooooo important on their phone to risk such devestation? Lol, not! Cheers.