Relaxing
Enjoy the days8 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Very nice indeed. I like the poem and the illustration. Unfortunately, few of us can bury our "to-do" lists. Best of luck in the contest with this nice entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Very nice indeed. I like the poem and the illustration. Unfortunately, few of us can bury our "to-do" lists. Best of luck in the contest with this nice entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you:)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lovely poem makes effective use of all syllables to describe the effects of summer. The contest rules call for three stanzas. I looked to be sure.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Your lovely poem makes effective use of all syllables to describe the effects of summer. The contest rules call for three stanzas. I looked to be sure.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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UGH! Another reader mentioned that-- I totally missed the mark.
I'm working on adding to it, but not sure .
Thank you for noticing:)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-6-9 poem about the great summer weather when we just want to relax and enjoy the sun, water and sand. All chores are left for a rainy day.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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A very well-written 3-6-9 poem about the great summer weather when we just want to relax and enjoy the sun, water and sand. All chores are left for a rainy day.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you:)
Comment from sarge4
Yeah, I've buried many a To Do list in the sand or the park or just driving down 5. That's what summer is for I think. I liked it, it meets the contest requirements. Good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Yeah, I've buried many a To Do list in the sand or the park or just driving down 5. That's what summer is for I think. I liked it, it meets the contest requirements. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you:)
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a cute little poem, that manages in a very few words to capture the essence of the relaxation aspect of the summer. I hope it obtains a good reult in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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This is a cute little poem, that manages in a very few words to capture the essence of the relaxation aspect of the summer. I hope it obtains a good reult in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you:)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful 'smileworthy' write especially with that pic! ;) Your poem, however, does not meet the contest requirements as the entry should have three stanzas of 3-6-9. ;( ;( Please let me know when/if you decide to correct and i would be happy to re-review. :) Good luck! ;)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Such a wonderful 'smileworthy' write especially with that pic! ;) Your poem, however, does not meet the contest requirements as the entry should have three stanzas of 3-6-9. ;( ;( Please let me know when/if you decide to correct and i would be happy to re-review. :) Good luck! ;)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Oops! Totally missed that specific part.
I'll try to revise. Thanks for the correction:)
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! it does point out the passing of time and how it affects us.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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this is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! it does point out the passing of time and how it affects us.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing -- I appreciate both:)
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a cute little poem which well meets the contest requirements in terms of meter. How true it is. The picture adds something. I especially liked the second line. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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This is a cute little poem which well meets the contest requirements in terms of meter. How true it is. The picture adds something. I especially liked the second line. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate both:)
