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No Help Needed

When children marry, your advice is not welcome.

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Comment from Pantygynt
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In one way or another this sort of thing happens with most species. There comes a point where the younger generation need to flex the muscles of their own independence. The still love you but...

A couple of items needing attention here:

'They don't take my advise' -- This should be 'advice' as it is a noun, adise is the verb form.

'(thou) though they act the children'

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
    Thank you for your corrections. I am changing them now.
    Sandtana Kay
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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It is a sad fact of life that the younger generation equates aging with diminished brain capacity. They forget how much the elderly have to offer as they have experienced and survived much more than can possibly be imagined - valuable knowledge to draw from. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2019