Loving Arms
A one line poem4 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Lori, this is a lovely message in your 'one line'? poem. Will taking up two lines go against you in the contest do you think? It is one sentence so I say Good Luck on a nice piece of work well displayed. Regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi Lori, this is a lovely message in your 'one line'? poem. Will taking up two lines go against you in the contest do you think? It is one sentence so I say Good Luck on a nice piece of work well displayed. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Don't know yet, I didn't even t
think about the 2 lines only a one sentence. oh well. thxs for review
lulube
Comment from country ranch writer
Beautiful done using this photo,it is so bright and cherry. So glad the elderly lady help you out of you pain and sorry to be able to write about her success in helping you get well again.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Beautiful done using this photo,it is so bright and cherry. So glad the elderly lady help you out of you pain and sorry to be able to write about her success in helping you get well again.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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thxs for your comments, Barb. Glad you enjoyed it.
lulube
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Comment from QC Poet
Lovely written sentiments, descriptive, of admiration for the loved. This may possibly not need the 2nd and in line four. Good Luck in the contest if entered and Thank you for Sharing your Gift.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Lovely written sentiments, descriptive, of admiration for the loved. This may possibly not need the 2nd and in line four. Good Luck in the contest if entered and Thank you for Sharing your Gift.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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thxs for your comments. I did spot an error and have corrected it. thxs for your review
Comment from Sallyo
That's one long line, but it's recognisably one passage/sentence, so it should pass muster. I'm assuming it's referring to being born again, but I could be wrong.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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That's one long line, but it's recognisably one passage/sentence, so it should pass muster. I'm assuming it's referring to being born again, but I could be wrong.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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thxs for your comments. It definitely can be read as you read it or a young lady receiving advice from an elderly lady, that led her out of a sorrowful life and into her lover's arms
