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Comment from Lulube
Surprised it wasn't a Halloween night as well. lol Boy, that poor mamma cat, 13 of them pulling on her for milk. or is it? lol great little story, wakens the superstitions in oneself's beliefs. Stay away from the black ones.
lulube
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Surprised it wasn't a Halloween night as well. lol Boy, that poor mamma cat, 13 of them pulling on her for milk. or is it? lol great little story, wakens the superstitions in oneself's beliefs. Stay away from the black ones.
lulube
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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The sequel..
"13 Kittens"
Is completed.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from country ranch writer
We had a cat called magic he appeared on day out of the blue he stayed for over a year and one day devided to move on. No one wants black cats because of superstitions.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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We had a cat called magic he appeared on day out of the blue he stayed for over a year and one day devided to move on. No one wants black cats because of superstitions.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Just completes the end entitled...
"Twelve Black Cats!"
Ricky
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Ricky
Please continue writing about the black cat who on Friday the 13th had 13 kittens.
You asked if some thing was wrong, the only thing that was wrong was when
Bruce asked Katie if 5here was something wrong?"
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Gert
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hello Ricky
Please continue writing about the black cat who on Friday the 13th had 13 kittens.
You asked if some thing was wrong, the only thing that was wrong was when
Bruce asked Katie if 5here was something wrong?"
...
Gert
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Thanks Kurt it'll be done in about an hour at 3:30 here and Eastern standard Time New Jersey.
Ricky I have to admit that I had a little help writing this I went into a book I bought when I was competing with the international Society of poetry in Washington DC the book is called Wings Of An Angel by Angel Logan not course I don't want to copyright or work and I believe it or not there's very few poems in here about angels and I got to the one called Field of gold when the picture of hand drawn golden angel lying down sleeping the artwork is quite interesting and that's the same one that was used on the cover
Ricky
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Hello Ricky
I recall the international Society of poetry.
Gert
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You left us all hanging wondering what's up and why there's been no response. This will certainly make many a reader come back to find out. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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You left us all hanging wondering what's up and why there's been no response. This will certainly make many a reader come back to find out. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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this will be completed today and you will be very highly surprised and enjoyed with this 13 kittens as they grow up and what they do to this world!
Ricky
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The black cat family started well but all on a sudden an accident and untoward event took place and now the mystery continues, to progress in the work in progress book; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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The black cat family started well but all on a sudden an accident and untoward event took place and now the mystery continues, to progress in the work in progress book; well said, well done.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Well said..
Not done?
Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a dark and mysterious write Ricky and I liked your overall presentation. I was struggling with this line:
"Maybe a given of Witchs?"
Do you mean:
"Maybe a (coven) of (Witches)?"
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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This is a dark and mysterious write Ricky and I liked your overall presentation. I was struggling with this line:
"Maybe a given of Witchs?"
Do you mean:
"Maybe a (coven) of (Witches)?"
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Dated a Witch once and yes..
Coven.
She. Still gotz my heart in her Oven!
Ricky
