Our Lord's Delight
My first Villanelle to my heart and love.11 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Looks good to me, but hey, I am not an expert on this particular poetry style. A sweet tribute to your wife and worthy entry for the rhyming poetry contest. It works as a love poem, too.
Sending you my best today and for the contest. You can breathe now.
Sal ;+)
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Looks good to me, but hey, I am not an expert on this particular poetry style. A sweet tribute to your wife and worthy entry for the rhyming poetry contest. It works as a love poem, too.
Sending you my best today and for the contest. You can breathe now.
Sal ;+)
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Thank you Sally. I'm glad you liked it. :) I wanted to post it in the love contest but it wasn't ready.
