Unconditional Love
5-7-5 form67 total reviews
Comment from Darkhorse555
the picture in itself holds deep love and affection, falling into your words truly God's gift to us man's best friend always a blessing reading something that lights above the stars
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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the picture in itself holds deep love and affection, falling into your words truly God's gift to us man's best friend always a blessing reading something that lights above the stars
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Darkhorse, thank you so much for a truly wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and you feel it light the stars above....
Comment from dragonpoet
The words of this poem is true for both the dog and for us too. We have to remember that. I like the pictures.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing
dragonpoet
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The words of this poem is true for both the dog and for us too. We have to remember that. I like the pictures.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Joan, thank you for a wonderful review...and for all your good luck...I am so glad you like it...and I like the picture as well...
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
This is a very clever way to match the syllable requirement of the contest. The image worked perfectly with the theme. I enjoyed this piece and thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda.
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This is a very clever way to match the syllable requirement of the contest. The image worked perfectly with the theme. I enjoyed this piece and thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Brenda, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome...Blessing to you as well...
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Love the picture. I've never seen a picture where Jesus is holding a pup. He's gentle with whatever He holds. Great words that flows well with your image.
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Love the picture. I've never seen a picture where Jesus is holding a pup. He's gentle with whatever He holds. Great words that flows well with your image.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Rosemary, I love the picture as well...thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...God Bless..
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a lyrically sweet poem in this charming write and warm image, for a lovely presentation - perfectly compliant with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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In my opinion, a lyrically sweet poem in this charming write and warm image, for a lovely presentation - perfectly compliant with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Hi Eve, can I ask you what was wrong with the poem...sense you 4 stared it...I am so glad you like the presentation...and thank you for your best wishes...
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There's nothing wrong with the poem - I provided my honest opinion of the work, which I am entitled to do...Eve
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Perhaps I can be more clear - I found the write neither inferior nor superior - I hope that helps...Eve
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I only asked about the 4 stars because your review sounded like you truly liked the poem...I have hit the 4 stars myself after giving a good review not meaning to...I understand now...thank you...
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You're welcome...Eve
Comment from Gunner Lil
A very good read. It has a nice pace.
The short poem says a lot with only
a few word, but are so loving and sincere.
Keep up the good work and good luck.
Thank you!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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A very good read. It has a nice pace.
The short poem says a lot with only
a few word, but are so loving and sincere.
Keep up the good work and good luck.
Thank you!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Gunner Lil, thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...thank you for the good luck...
Comment from royowen
It's almost like God took a dog, and named it backwards and gave this priceless gift to man, revealing the nature of servanthood and the very persona of God himself, perhaps a little less idealistic than that, but, you know, "there are lots of yucky things to roll in" Well done, great write, blessings, Roy
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It's almost like God took a dog, and named it backwards and gave this priceless gift to man, revealing the nature of servanthood and the very persona of God himself, perhaps a little less idealistic than that, but, you know, "there are lots of yucky things to roll in" Well done, great write, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Roy, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...I love animals...blessings to you as well...
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Most welcome
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all syllables in this moving, uplifting
5-7-5. I wonder how many people think to thank God for their beloved pets when they pray.
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You have made excellent use of all syllables in this moving, uplifting
5-7-5. I wonder how many people think to thank God for their beloved pets when they pray.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Janice, I pray He takes care of them every night in my prayers...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...God Bless...
Comment from Raul1
Such an adorable picture of Jesus holding a puppy dog in his arms. I like the poem itself and it is well written. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Such an adorable picture of Jesus holding a puppy dog in his arms. I like the poem itself and it is well written. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Raul, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I love the picture as well...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for the good luck...
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You're welcome.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I love the picture, love the poem that goes with it. Yes, dogs were created to be loyal and pure. They only turn mean when trained to be that way. At least in general, that seems to be true. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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I love the picture, love the poem that goes with it. Yes, dogs were created to be loyal and pure. They only turn mean when trained to be that way. At least in general, that seems to be true. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Darlene, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I love the picture as well...they are born pure...thank you for the good luck...
