Unconditional Love
5-7-5 form67 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
I am currently coping with a pair of ten week old pups so this resonated with me -- not that I consider myself in any shape, way or form the equivalent of Jesus Christ, whatever the pups might think.
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I am currently coping with a pair of ten week old pups so this resonated with me -- not that I consider myself in any shape, way or form the equivalent of Jesus Christ, whatever the pups might think.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Jim, LOL...they can be a hand full...but they bring so much love to our lives...and they stand by us with unconditional love...as God does...thank you for a wonderful review...God Bless...you and your puppies...
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this short verse has a sweet message.
Loyal pups are indeed pure, as are children.
This is a lovely entry for the contest, good luck to you.
Sharon
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I think this short verse has a sweet message.
Loyal pups are indeed pure, as are children.
This is a lovely entry for the contest, good luck to you.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Sharon, thank you so much for a wonderful review...dogs do have an unconditional love for us...so glad you like it...thank you for the good luck...
Comment from Mark D. R.
The wonder of how all animals and humans were created is included in your short verse.
IMHO ... 'Gifts' does not need to be capitalized, but your intended meaning may differ from my interpretation.
Like your link between 'pure' and 'snow.' Your accompanying artwork is a good match for your writing prompt entry.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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The wonder of how all animals and humans were created is included in your short verse.
IMHO ... 'Gifts' does not need to be capitalized, but your intended meaning may differ from my interpretation.
Like your link between 'pure' and 'snow.' Your accompanying artwork is a good match for your writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Mark, I changed it...sometimes it takes someones else's eyes to see what works better...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...
Comment from Ogden
Two questions occurred to me when viewing your poem. Don't you agree that what you wrote is true, concerning all of God's creatures? And, how in the world did the photographer get Jesus to pose holding that puppy?
:o)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Two questions occurred to me when viewing your poem. Don't you agree that what you wrote is true, concerning all of God's creatures? And, how in the world did the photographer get Jesus to pose holding that puppy?
:o)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Don, no matter how God got this picture to be...
if He wanted it to show...it is going to...I am an animal lover of all God's creators...and I keep them all in my prayers...so many as God does...give us unconditional love...thank you so much for a wonderful review...
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You are very welcome.
Don
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smiling big...xxoo
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Me, too. :o)
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have a wonderful weekend Don...
Comment from Sanku
That is a fantastic picture and it tells a great story. It matches your three lined little poem too. a tribute to the loyalty of the beautiful creatures.And of course God loves them .Theirs is unconditional love.
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That is a fantastic picture and it tells a great story. It matches your three lined little poem too. a tribute to the loyalty of the beautiful creatures.And of course God loves them .Theirs is unconditional love.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Sanka, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I love the picture as well...they both give us unconditional love...sigh...I am so glad you like it...thank you...
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Wow. I've never seen an image like that before. I know dogs are supposed to be man's best friend, but --
Whoa!
Hahaha
Fun stuff!!
Thanks for the smile. Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Wow. I've never seen an image like that before. I know dogs are supposed to be man's best friend, but --
Whoa!
Hahaha
Fun stuff!!
Thanks for the smile. Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Robyn, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I love the picture...dogs love us unconditionally...I am so glad you like it...and you are welcome for the smile...and thank you for the good luck...
Comment from lyenochka
We have a great Creator indeed! And there is something special about dogs, that seem to be well known for their attribute of being loyal. Good syllable count and message.
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We have a great Creator indeed! And there is something special about dogs, that seem to be well known for their attribute of being loyal. Good syllable count and message.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Helen, thank you so very much...I am so gad you like it...dogs have an unconditional love...and we truly have a great creator...thank you...
Comment from Lulube
This just flooded my heart. I just recently got a 2 month old pup. It's been 40 years and I'd forgotten how precious and nerve racking they can be. Just like a baby. This is a heartfelt reminder of their innocence. and they love their masters that love them, no matter what mood their masters are in
lulube
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This just flooded my heart. I just recently got a 2 month old pup. It's been 40 years and I'd forgotten how precious and nerve racking they can be. Just like a baby. This is a heartfelt reminder of their innocence. and they love their masters that love them, no matter what mood their masters are in
lulube
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Lulube...they love us unconditionally...I don't have one now...but it won't be to long and I will get one...I think it is wonderful you got a puppy...and yes they can be nerve racking...but just look into their eyes...and all is well...thank you so much for a wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...
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welcome and hope you do get a little four legged soul to enter your heart.
lulube
Comment from Y. M. Roger
what a heartwarming picture for dog lover's of all ages!! ;) :) Never seen that one before -- unique offering for the contest! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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what a heartwarming picture for dog lover's of all ages!! ;) :) Never seen that one before -- unique offering for the contest! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Yvette, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I love this picture as well...and thank you for your best of luck...smiling back at you...
Comment from Kate Arbor
Very well put, a puppy's fur is like snow. I never thought of it that way. They are defiantly God's little wonderful creations. The art fits the poem beautiful as well.
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Very well put, a puppy's fur is like snow. I never thought of it that way. They are defiantly God's little wonderful creations. The art fits the poem beautiful as well.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Kate, thank you so very much for a wonderful review....I am so glad you like it...
