Be Wee With Bea Part2
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Walking upon Water"Continuation of Bea's Strollings
9 total reviews
Comment from Mabaker
Ah, yes worth a six Liz. A lovely echo of Bea being scared and nothing to be scared of. Fearful for Scruffles and Sweet Puppy and to find they were safe. The maker of ideas as always helps her overcome. Love Anne
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Ah, yes worth a six Liz. A lovely echo of Bea being scared and nothing to be scared of. Fearful for Scruffles and Sweet Puppy and to find they were safe. The maker of ideas as always helps her overcome. Love Anne
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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I seem to see a lot of shiny objects on this site. I wrote something then clicked off...sound familiar??? Now what I previously wrote: What a pleasant surprise. Thank you for your six stars and for your lovely review. The mystery is much closer to being solved.
Comment from john mallahan
As always, am thrilled to see Bea venture forth! I know you posted your last episode, which didn't read, sorry. The "walking on water" is very intriguing. The beasts can do it too, and, sometimes, we don't even know when! Keep on going! Am taking a respite from fanstory, cause am not sure it is helping me. Need an editor & publisher from all that have produced in last 2 & half years. Hoping to see what happens, & good luck to your ventures!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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As always, am thrilled to see Bea venture forth! I know you posted your last episode, which didn't read, sorry. The "walking on water" is very intriguing. The beasts can do it too, and, sometimes, we don't even know when! Keep on going! Am taking a respite from fanstory, cause am not sure it is helping me. Need an editor & publisher from all that have produced in last 2 & half years. Hoping to see what happens, & good luck to your ventures!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Since you are not going to be able to follow up on the story and have shown a kind interest I will tell you the **spoiler** creature is the mist distortion of a momma bear and her puppies some large and some smaller. One was in a puppy mill and as a result lost her back leg. These are all dogs I shared with my partner. So now you know. Maybe you've outgrown this site. I wish you well. Maybe you'll come back.
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Oh I know will be back, just taking a break. I love yer story, & hope you continue! Thx for the spoiler alerts! Always good to know!
Comment from lyenochka
Yay! I liked the " water-splashing dance of joy." And I also liked how Bea overcame her fears by focusing on her friends and continuing forth for them. Seems like that Maker held her up for her act of faith!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Yay! I liked the " water-splashing dance of joy." And I also liked how Bea overcame her fears by focusing on her friends and continuing forth for them. Seems like that Maker held her up for her act of faith!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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I am so glad you captured my intention in this Chapter. Thank you for your faithful reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from BeasPeas
A wonderful chapter to your story, Liz. We are left wondering what DID keep wee bear from sinking into the swamp. As always your writing is clear and interesting, well described, and charming. I particularly like paragraph 4. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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A wonderful chapter to your story, Liz. We are left wondering what DID keep wee bear from sinking into the swamp. As always your writing is clear and interesting, well described, and charming. I particularly like paragraph 4. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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As always, I enjoyed your enthusiastic review. Thank you.
Comment from Alex Rosel
I've read a couple of your previous posts in this series. This one is more subdued in tone than I remember the others were. I'm assuming it's a narrative pause before another bout of action {smiles}.
Here are a few points you might like to consider:
There were no burdocks to dodge only a swamp to navigate. -- If this was mine, I'd insert a comma after "to dodge".
I do like the name "Sweet Puppy"; it's laden with sentiment {smiles}.
she felt like fifty bees were buzzing inside her -- Nice simile {smiles}.
heir water-splashing dance of joy. -- Ha, ha {smiles}.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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I've read a couple of your previous posts in this series. This one is more subdued in tone than I remember the others were. I'm assuming it's a narrative pause before another bout of action {smiles}.
Here are a few points you might like to consider:
There were no burdocks to dodge only a swamp to navigate. -- If this was mine, I'd insert a comma after "to dodge".
I do like the name "Sweet Puppy"; it's laden with sentiment {smiles}.
she felt like fifty bees were buzzing inside her -- Nice simile {smiles}.
heir water-splashing dance of joy. -- Ha, ha {smiles}.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your supportive review. Those dastardly commas, thank you for the heads-up.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I congratulate you for becoming a great published author; this adventurous and fantastic work is full of fun, joy and entertainment; good lessons on morality and values are well said, well done.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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I congratulate you for becoming a great published author; this adventurous and fantastic work is full of fun, joy and entertainment; good lessons on morality and values are well said, well done.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your enthusiastic and supportive review. I'm glad you are enjoying Bea and her crew. (poetry unintended)
Comment from Sally Law
This is as sweet as it gets. I am so much like Bea. I have to exercise my brain every day! Sweet puppy and Scruffles are wonderful side kicks and friends. Such a scary swamp, it's good to have friends along. A good word picture for life. Sometimes, I feel like Bea, up to my neck in it all.
One small suggestion. I would capitalize 'Maker.'
Sending you my best today along with six stars. Superb.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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This is as sweet as it gets. I am so much like Bea. I have to exercise my brain every day! Sweet puppy and Scruffles are wonderful side kicks and friends. Such a scary swamp, it's good to have friends along. A good word picture for life. Sometimes, I feel like Bea, up to my neck in it all.
One small suggestion. I would capitalize 'Maker.'
Sending you my best today along with six stars. Superb.
Sal xo
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for such a positive review. I'm glad you are enjoying Bea. Thank you also for the 6 stars.
Comment from country ranch writer
Sometimes we fear having to do something we'd rather no have to and later on we find out it wasn't as bad as we thought and everything turned out okay.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Sometimes we fear having to do something we'd rather no have to and later on we find out it wasn't as bad as we thought and everything turned out okay.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad you see the values woven throughout my stories.
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hooray for water-splashing dances of joy -- they are the bestest!! ;) :) This is such a wonderful chapter, Liz, complete with Bea's self-satisfaction in her bravery!! ;) :) I wanted to point out that you have an acknowledgement for a picture, but there is no pic....? Thank you so very much for sharing Bea and company once again!! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Hooray for water-splashing dances of joy -- they are the bestest!! ;) :) This is such a wonderful chapter, Liz, complete with Bea's self-satisfaction in her bravery!! ;) :) I wanted to point out that you have an acknowledgement for a picture, but there is no pic....? Thank you so very much for sharing Bea and company once again!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the enthusiastic review and for the head-up about no picture. I wonder where it went. It's a good one too. I, like Bea & company will have to go on a hunt.
