Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Great job with this difficult challenge. I see you stretching yourself and serving up fine poetry offerings every day, Melissa. I will watch for the upcoming ones.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019

Thanks so much, Sally... not my usual fare, but it was homework. a fun challenge.

Melissa

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

Awesome, Melissa. I took your advise and read this one aloud as though I was a rapper. That was fun. And it sure works as a rap. I actually like the rhythm of rap. You must, too, or you could not have written this remarkable piece (rap). I can only sit back and enjoy. Or rap with it.

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019

Thank you Debbie. It is still sing songing in my head. LOL. The Kyrielle form was first written for the church in the 1300s and used as the form for Liturgies. Well, my church is more laid back and prefers rap to high church liturgies, hence the Beats.... haha.

Melissa

reply by Debbie Pope on 10-Sep-2019

I would like your church.