Swamp
Love Like You're Dyin' To Be Free28 total reviews
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Virtual Six and wow fantastic poem!!! I really liked this and the Swamp was an excellent title. I think your explanation really was not necessary as I got all that - but better to offer it to the slower perceptive readers. I happen to really enjoy the way you wrote this in its entirety and the photo is why I clicked in to read it. Normally I say cheers and put my name - but I am still in a mourning phase - so I will just say I look forward to reading more of your writing and will be fanning you! Fonda
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Virtual Six and wow fantastic poem!!! I really liked this and the Swamp was an excellent title. I think your explanation really was not necessary as I got all that - but better to offer it to the slower perceptive readers. I happen to really enjoy the way you wrote this in its entirety and the photo is why I clicked in to read it. Normally I say cheers and put my name - but I am still in a mourning phase - so I will just say I look forward to reading more of your writing and will be fanning you! Fonda
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Harley Dayman Rayne Quinn
Something about that whole thing reminded me for the movie Ghost Rider. It was a cool poem and I could close my eyes to see every word you said
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Something about that whole thing reminded me for the movie Ghost Rider. It was a cool poem and I could close my eyes to see every word you said
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Brett, this is quite a story - very imaginative revealing a great imagination. A dark story - quite gruesome, dying together ending in a swamp. A well written piece in free verse. Good entry to the contest - Good Luck - Dorothy
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Hi Brett, this is quite a story - very imaginative revealing a great imagination. A dark story - quite gruesome, dying together ending in a swamp. A well written piece in free verse. Good entry to the contest - Good Luck - Dorothy
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Review received.
Comment from Sugarray77
Brett, you verse is very good and portrays the unhappy demise of this couple ~ very imaginative to place them in the swamp (death) as you write. Very nicely done!
Melissa
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Brett, you verse is very good and portrays the unhappy demise of this couple ~ very imaginative to place them in the swamp (death) as you write. Very nicely done!
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Is this about a drunk driver? A richly worded write about the death on the road due to drink driving, I enjoyed your sad and descriptive story Brett, love Dolly x
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Is this about a drunk driver? A richly worded write about the death on the road due to drink driving, I enjoyed your sad and descriptive story Brett, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Yes this is about a drunk driver, and two lovers who spend eternity together. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Fonda Little
I love narrative poems! You did a great job on this one sir! Loved your word choice! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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I love narrative poems! You did a great job on this one sir! Loved your word choice! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Joan E.
Dean would have been very proud of the horror described in this poem--may he rest in peace. I admired your storytelling and rhymed couplets. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
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Dean would have been very proud of the horror described in this poem--may he rest in peace. I admired your storytelling and rhymed couplets. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Susan Morritt
I loved your strange story in a poem... and it sure does tell a story. The fish tailin' car, the sirens, the crosses... all of these make it come alive, like movie footage. Great job!
Susan
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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I loved your strange story in a poem... and it sure does tell a story. The fish tailin' car, the sirens, the crosses... all of these make it come alive, like movie footage. Great job!
Susan
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate the review and your insights.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Brett. I enjoyed reading this well written and rhymed poem, but the story line is very unclear. I'll left with the questions of who lived, who died, and who is in the swamp. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Hi Brett. I enjoyed reading this well written and rhymed poem, but the story line is very unclear. I'll left with the questions of who lived, who died, and who is in the swamp. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. They both died. But end up together in the afterlife, which is what the swamp symbolizes. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Gail Denham
oooh - spooky - and did they both end up in the flaming car - and then the swamp - I wasn't quite sure - still it's a spooky story and you wrote it very well.
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oooh - spooky - and did they both end up in the flaming car - and then the swamp - I wasn't quite sure - still it's a spooky story and you wrote it very well.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Yes they ended up together. Appreciate the review.
