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Mom's Royal Math

Hmmm...math might be fun after all

9 total reviews 
Comment from Gail Denham
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Queens are not necessarily those with the top-notch brains. So you could easily slip some new math into her treasury and she's prob. never notice. A Duke maybe - so go with caution into the division part. For my money, the old math is fine - I didn't understand all of that anyway - so how would I catch on to new math. grrr.
Good poem

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    The whole new math thing was a blind crusade of a non-math admin lackey somewhere... ;-) Thanks for your great review!!
Comment from Mia Twysted
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Very catchy, It rolled pretty well off the tongue. I like how you have the different colored words it made it very playful. This would be a good learning tool for kids that are studying math and its various subjects.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thank you for for the review. :-))
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written maths poem for children, I am certain they will see the value of maths and all the things we can do to make our jewels more and our troubles less.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thanks for your review!
Comment from J.D. Cromwell
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I love any tools that help others learn, especially rhyming schemes. Making learning fun promotes uninterested parties more willing to participate. Great job at that. My only qualm, however, is the highlighted words threw me off the rhythm of the poem. I instinctively want to emphasize those words. For improvement, I'd focus on improving the meter. Overall, good job.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a cleverly thought out write and a fine presentation for the contest! I enjoyed your inventive and unique poem and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thank you for your review - much appreciated!
Comment from Anntonette
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This poem deserves six stars! It was well organized and I like how the yellow relates to math and equations. I use to be good at math, but I seem to forgot it all lol.
- Anntonette J

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Wow, Anntonette!! ;) Those stars are beautiful and your comments are so very appreciated today!! ;) Thank you and may you find a little 'math fun' where you are!! ;) ;)
Comment from Joseph Geraci
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Good read for a child's math learning type jingle. However I found it a little odd you "start with operations" which is the only part of math that will be mentioned at all and only half of the order of operations are gone through. Furthermore they are run through backwards. Perhaps the word "arithmetic" should be used in place of "operations". Also "multiply them times five" should be "multiply them by five" Thank you for the read

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is a good poem to practice some basic math operations. It seems like there is a double meaning to 'band' and 'fools' and 'groupies.' I was wondering if 'olympiad' should be capitalized. Fun poem, probably appeals to third grade and up, since I think multiplication comes along in third grade usually.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thank you for your review!!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Wow amazing poem, you made math sound so easy. I am pretty sure this poem will be delightful for the kids in the elementary school. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Wow, Iza!! ;) Those stars are beautiful and your comments are so very appreciated today!! ;) Thank you and may you find a little 'math fun' where you are!! ;) ;)
reply by Iza Deleanu on 09-Sep-2019
    You are welcome and keep the math away😊not my forte
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Lol! Will do!! ;-)