Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What another terrific chapter. A sultry beginning and a happy ending you can't ask for more. I wish my births were that easy, and in an hour, lucky her. It's well-written, very interesting start to finish. Well done.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

So glad you enjoyed another Breedline adventure. And yes, I agree. I wish childbirth was that easy. LOL!

Thanks again my friend!
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Outstanding chapter, Ms. Shana! Also, the artwork is fantastic. You have an eye for captivating readers.
The scene was perfect with emotions that kept me tied to the story. Apollyon and Yelena's connection is truly believable. The birth of their son was touching. You did a great job keeping this reader glued to each word.
Excellence all around.

Nate

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019

Thank you, Nate! :)

You're a gem my friend! So glad you enjoyed the scenes between Apollyon and Yelena. I love writing their touching moments. They've come a long way, from him kidnapping her, to her wanting to escape, to falling in love with each other.

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Oh yes indeed, I've seen the birth of both my daughters, and to see this miracle is the opportunity of a lifetime, when I saw the birth of my elder child, aroused in me, the love God had for His children, He is fiercely protective and and yet has the nurturing nature of a mother. No wonder He said, they shall be in our image and our likeness, He has both the nature of man and woman. This is an awesome post dear Shana, well done, blessings. Roy

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019

Thank you, Roy :)

Glad you found the birth touching. I wanted it to be a moment they really came together as a loving couple. Their son will change everything and bring them closer, and closer to God.

Thanks so much!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 09-Sep-2019

Well done, great writing Shana

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello scongrove
I like the way you are writing your story, your dialogue is where it's not too long and found each character in your fiction story kept my interest.
So here I am waiting to read if Apollyon and Yelena, new born boy will be spared from the from turning into a wolf at the age of eighteen.

Gert

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019

Thank you, Gert :)

So glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter. Positive words are the greatest reward.
Apollyon is a mix of a Breedline, an Adalwolf, and a succubus. He was engineered in a lab and placed in the womb of a full-blooded succubus. Yelena is a full-blooded succubus. Their son will be a mix of all. But who knows what he will be as he grows older. Since he has no twin, unfortunately no, he will not get his Breedline wolf. Maybe Tobias's story will be later in another series. :)

Thanks again for reading and for the positive feedback. Hope you stop by again to catch another Breedline adventure.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Gert sherwood on 09-Sep-2019

You are welcome Shana
I will be waiting and you for filling me.
Gert

Comment from Diana L Crawford

Excellent

Such a tender and beautiful chapter. What I love most is how dedicated to each other the breedline's are when meeting their mate. The powerful bond is evident throughout your story. I'm sure also that the sex probably brought on the labor, but so happy the baby is healthy. And I'm also glad you chose my man Jason Momoa to represent in your pic! He is the epitome of male yummyness!!! LoL! xoxo

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019

Thank you, Diana :)

I'm pleased to hear you enjoyed the chapter. I do love my characters and Apollyon is a new favorite for me. I have some exciting news too since you brought up Jason Momoa. I got to meet him Saturday! And yes, he is as handsome in person as he is on the screen. Although I think he looks younger in person. I was so excited to hand him my book with his 'close' image on the cover. He seemed to like it. I had him sign my author's copy. That is once in a lifetime chance. He was at the Wizard World in Tulsa, OK. I live not far from there so I definitely went for it.

Thanks again!
Shana :)

reply by Diana L Crawford on 09-Sep-2019

I am sooooo jealous!! Just kidding, but not! LoL! He is really a down to earth guy! Loves his motorcycle and his family. He?s the hottest guy on the planet in my option. What an awesome keepsake and memory you have now!!!! xoxo

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019

I know! I love my expression on my face in the photo. Haha! You can tell I'm real excited. But it was all natural.
Thanks!

reply by Diana L Crawford on 09-Sep-2019

Did you pay royalty fees to use his picture?

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019

My artist knows him, and the photo resembles him, but is not his exactness. The first image looked just like him and the publishing company said no way without his written permission. I couldn't get that because I don't personally know him, so my artist changed the face to make him look like 'Jason's cousin.' Haha! It still looks like him though. I actually had a cover in the first image made for him. I told him this cover is just for him and the original is different but still resembles his features. He said, "Cool." I was sweating bullets, praying he would not be upset.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 09-Sep-2019

Incredible! Great job and changing it enough to be able to use it. Sometimes it is forbidden if it even closely resembles a famous persons image! Good for you! So glad I have been blessed to read.

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019

Thanks Diana! :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Good going, creditable work in progress, epical taletelling, significant characterization, skimmed and balanced plot development, realistic and contributory dialogues, a new generation begins; filial ending; well said, well done.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019

Thank you, Alcreator Litt Dear :)

Glad you took the time to enjoy another Breedline adventure. I especially love writing touching moments between characters, and this one was great to write.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

Wow! What a chapter! Very beautifully and tastefully written. Wonderfully appropriate artwork. Everything has come together so well. Your reminder and hint as to why Apollyon is back on earth brought back some stark reality to their situation. Really love how you handled everything.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019

Thank you, Faye :)

I was hoping the chapter with the love scenes came across as tasteful. Sometimes I think I walk on the edge. Haha! But this book is a lot more softer than the others. I've learned to leave more to the imagination.
I had a exciting Saturday. I got the chance to meet Jason Momoa and give him a copy of my book since he inspired my character Apollyon. He seemed to like the cover and maybe he'll read it someday. Anyway, I got a photo with him holding my book and he signed my author's copy. It was great! Just wanted to share that with you.

Thanks again my friend!
Hugs,
Shana :)