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A Lonely Death

When it is too late to worry about details

3 total reviews 
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Excellent
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An exciting choice of one-liner backed up with science. Intriguing formation:"blood type is no longer relative"-when it starts to freeze. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019

Comment from Teri7
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a very sad, but very well written One Line poem you have penned for the contest. So sad this happened to a nurse, but sad for it to happen to anyone! You used very good words and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019

Comment from Susan Larson
Excellent
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I love that you educate the reader with your information about the freezings point of blood. What a tragic thing to happen to someone and how horrible for the person who found her. What a chilling picture and what a chilling thought. Blood type no longer relative. Hope you do well
In the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019