Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Ricky
with took place years as to what Carol passed away from
"Deep Vernacular Thrombosis.'
I found I got very emotional as I was reading.
Gert

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019

Thanks Gert,
Emotional?
Is good?
Ricky

reply by Gert sherwood on 07-Sep-2019

You are welcome Ricky.
Gert

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is well penned an flows beautifully end to end making for a thoroughly enjoyable reading experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019

Thanks Mystic Angel.
Ricky

Comment from beizanten

Excellent

great attention capturing tittle. A pretty good opening stanza. A rather good second stanza. A good third stanza. A rather great ending stanza. you did pretty well

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019

Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
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Comment from fluffnstuff

Excellent

Oh my, you have really gone through the ultimate of losses...and i can feel the pain through your words and i am sorry. The loss of her only child was too much for her to bare. I have an only child also and i can't imagine. It is good that you can vent your pain. We are with you, many of us. Fluff

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019

Thanks my dear.
and as I continue on this journaling Journey that will be many many many more these for Carolyn also my son Jason.
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