Nature's Hidden Treasures
Beauty deep within the earth...12 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Love how you laid this whole bit out. The poetry is lovely as well as the font. Creative and eye catching. Great overall effect! (and I do so love jade!) Great job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Love how you laid this whole bit out. The poetry is lovely as well as the font. Creative and eye catching. Great overall effect! (and I do so love jade!) Great job!
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much! Jade is a fantastic stone! I love all gemstones. Colors, colors, colors. Sparkly or polished-each has its own unique beauty. I?m just sorry I couldn?t get them all in this! LoL! So happy you enjoyed it! xoxo
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
I love, love, love your poems, and just like the other ones, this poem was also great. I also liked how you used a Latin word, and not a English word for opal. Another thing I liked was how you made your words colorful, in the second stanza. Very pretty. The last thing I liked, is that you wrote everything with a perfect syllable count. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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I love, love, love your poems, and just like the other ones, this poem was also great. I also liked how you used a Latin word, and not a English word for opal. Another thing I liked was how you made your words colorful, in the second stanza. Very pretty. The last thing I liked, is that you wrote everything with a perfect syllable count. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much Tanvi!
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a beautiful poem. I like how you present the gems with colors that match their characteristics. I'm sitting here trying to pick my favorite stanza. Of course I am partial to the stone that I like which is jade. I probably like the words of your opalus though. I like the painter's palette line.
Good luck in the contest. This is a gorgeous entry.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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What a beautiful poem. I like how you present the gems with colors that match their characteristics. I'm sitting here trying to pick my favorite stanza. Of course I am partial to the stone that I like which is jade. I probably like the words of your opalus though. I like the painter's palette line.
Good luck in the contest. This is a gorgeous entry.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you Debbie! I love gemstones and make jewelry sets from the tumbled polished stones. I don?t make so many these days as I used to, though. A few of my other favorites are labradorite and lapis and of course all of the flavors of crystals and topazes. I could go on and on... LoL!!! So glad you could appreciate the effort and thanks for your support. xoxo
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Lapis is another of my favorites. My favorite pieces of jewelry are lapis and jade. They are the only two pieces of jewelry that I have and like.
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how awesome! I'm sure you look awesome in them too with your coloring! did i ever mention how gorgeous you are! lol! if not, you are! :) xoxo
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Thank you. Thank you for those compliments.
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Just truth my dear xoxo
Comment from karenina
Well done, you! The images and the different colored lines in your poem are very effective! (I had to go look up the recipe for this 3-6-9, because I'm slow like that sometime...)---And yes! Three stanzas, first lines in all three are three syllables, second lines are six and third lines are nine! Perfectly done! I think gems should bring $100 prize, don't you? (smile)--Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Well done, you! The images and the different colored lines in your poem are very effective! (I had to go look up the recipe for this 3-6-9, because I'm slow like that sometime...)---And yes! Three stanzas, first lines in all three are three syllables, second lines are six and third lines are nine! Perfectly done! I think gems should bring $100 prize, don't you? (smile)--Karenina
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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You are more precious than these! Such a sweet review! I just hope the committee agrees with you! Can you write me a letter of reference please? Blahaha!!! Thanks for you encouragement!!!
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If only they allowed that I'd be penning my support in glowing praises!--K
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Awwwwwweeeee!!! xoxo
Comment from Janetsue
This is an exciting posting with pictures of those gorgeous jewels and gemstones. The colorful text adds another level of enjoyment. It is a quality entry for the 3-6-9 poem contest and I wish you the best!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This is an exciting posting with pictures of those gorgeous jewels and gemstones. The colorful text adds another level of enjoyment. It is a quality entry for the 3-6-9 poem contest and I wish you the best!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you! I try to entertain my reader if possible!! Nothing worse than boring!! Haha!! xoxo
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I would never associate the word 'boring' with you. :-)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
How very cool!! ;) You've taken this form and really made it informative and fun all at one time!! ;) :) I do hope this one does well, Diana -- thank you for sharing!! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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How very cool!! ;) You've taken this form and really made it informative and fun all at one time!! ;) :) I do hope this one does well, Diana -- thank you for sharing!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you Yvette! Gemstones are a favorite of mine. I make jewelry from the polished nugget stones. And color is in by blood! LoL! Thank you for appreciating! xoxo
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You deliver the three stanzas all cohesively connected through the theme of gem stones. The syllable counts in the first two stanzas is spot on, you are a syllable over in the third stanza (see below). Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
NOTE:
Pri-sm has two syllables because it has two nuclei. A nucleus is a sound that is at the heart of a syllable. In this case, the "m" sound is at the heart of a syllable, even though it is not considered a vowel. We linguists call this "syllabic m".
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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You deliver the three stanzas all cohesively connected through the theme of gem stones. The syllable counts in the first two stanzas is spot on, you are a syllable over in the third stanza (see below). Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
NOTE:
Pri-sm has two syllables because it has two nuclei. A nucleus is a sound that is at the heart of a syllable. In this case, the "m" sound is at the heart of a syllable, even though it is not considered a vowel. We linguists call this "syllabic m".
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Got it! I corrected the reflecting to reflects to bring it into compliance. I think I should just hire you as my proofreader! lol! thank you so much for you kind corrective suggestion. xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
these gems are so gorgeous and very expensive. Your poem does look like rainbow. The words are very colorful with the various of colors. Love your writing also.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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these gems are so gorgeous and very expensive. Your poem does look like rainbow. The words are very colorful with the various of colors. Love your writing also.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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thank you, Rosemary! your generous and uplifting feedback is greatly appreciated! xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
A lovely offering, dear Diana, times three. The colors are easily discernible with my declining eyesight. too. Thank you. :+)
Sending you my best today and for the 3-6-9 Poetry Contest.
Sally xo
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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A lovely offering, dear Diana, times three. The colors are easily discernible with my declining eyesight. too. Thank you. :+)
Sending you my best today and for the 3-6-9 Poetry Contest.
Sally xo
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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awesome, Sally, so happy you can see their beauty! I love gemstones. I make jewelry with only natural polished gemstones! They hold beauty like nothing else! appreciate you enjoyed this! xoxo Have an wonderful week, my friend!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Nature's hidden treasures that lover would be happy with -- Chinese jade, luxuriously polished beautiful stone or opal, precious mystical colourful stone or rare diamond reflects rainbow hues; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Nature's hidden treasures that lover would be happy with -- Chinese jade, luxuriously polished beautiful stone or opal, precious mystical colourful stone or rare diamond reflects rainbow hues; well said, well done.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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thank you very much! :) xoxo
