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Love Is All

My Nonet for September 9th

46 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is beautifully worded and constructed Nonet in perfect visual form. Colors are compatible, as you say that the visual is important to you and this proves it. Great job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    Thank you so much, dear Marilyn. You kind review of my Nonet is so appreciated.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
reply by BeasPeas on 11-Sep-2019
    Same to you, Sally.
Comment from pbomar1115
Exceptional
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After reading the news where people do such horrible thing to others, I realize love is special. In today's world, people make a special effort to do more harm than they do love.


Phillip

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thank you for the six baptism, dear Philip. I had just read the most depressing, unloving poem before posting this Nonet. I decided more than ever, it was needful and really what life?s all about.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally :+))
reply by pbomar1115 on 10-Sep-2019
    You're welcome, Sally.

    Phillip
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Nonet about love which is a gift from God that we as humans have a difficult time to practice it perfectly on our lives because we are only human we often fail to forgive others faults and keep lowing them.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much Sandra. I am glad you enjoyed my faith- filled Nonet.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Sylvia Page
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This is a great poem of God's love. His love knows no bounds. The syllable count is spot on in this Nonet. I love writing Nonets but don't have the time as I started on the process of publishing my book on Spices.
Wishing you well in the contest
Sylvia

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    A spice book and no time for a spicy Nonet. All right, you asked for it. Here comes a spicy Nonet for next time! I am hopeful to publish my Blind Girl series and a gluten free cookbook. My eyesight decline has slowed me down but I?m still at it. Sending you my best today my spicy friend,
    Sally xo
reply by Sylvia Page on 09-Sep-2019
    I look forward to reading all that. I just disabled the chapters on my spices here on FS.
Comment from Gail Denham
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Amazing Love, how can it be - that thou my God dost care for me.This is a mystery and miracle. Perhaps you do not write entirely about that - but your poem made me think about this.
Good poem

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thank you so much, dear Gail. I do these Nonets on the ninth days of the month as a challenge to myself and I invite everyone in my fanbase to join in the fun. Nonets are pretty easy. I hope you can join in.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo
reply by Gail Denham on 10-Sep-2019
    I keep forgetting the "nine" dates - hope to catch one - some day
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is truly a beautiful, moving Christian poem. Yes, God is the Giver of love, which His Word says we are to spread to others! If we say we love God but hate our brother, we lie.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    Thank you, Janice. I?m so pleased you enjoyed my faith inspired Nonet. I hope you will join in my informal Nonet for the 9th challenge anytime. It?s just for fun and to inspire appreciation for this lovely poetry form. My favorite.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Sara R.
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Sally, what a beautiful poem about love. Love is all, it endures it all. Love is beautiful and we are nothing without it. Beautifully stated.

I know you are full of love, it surrounds you.

Sara R.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for the kind review, Sara. It is so appreciated.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Beautiful words for the greatest truth. Love certainly is all. Without it, we're empty, and our lives are meaningless. It's a gift--the one thing we don't have to earn. :)

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments, Phyllis. We certainly agree, His love is the substance of it all.
    Sending you my best today as well,
    Sal xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A neat nonet Sally, exalting the great benefits of love, I liked the line: "A state of endless grace". I do have a suggestion for the word "done" which seems lame among all your choice words. Perhaps "Won" or "gained" might work better, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thank you, dear Dolly. It realize in our language differences, done may imply something different. In the Bible, it means finished or complete. My Nonet structure allowed for done, I suppose.i will look again and see what I can do. Thanks so much for the helpful input.
    Xo Sal
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a super job with your nonet Sally I enjoyed reading it. Your words flow well, the syllables are right per line, and the message is strong. This is a great presentation. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much, dear Jan. I appreciate the kind review and encouragement.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo