Fears
A contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
Some people love scary stuff, even scary movies some people thrive off them! I like the photo you have chosen too, I would be scared of lions in the wild too
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
  |
Some people love scary stuff, even scary movies some people thrive off them! I like the photo you have chosen too, I would be scared of lions in the wild too
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
-
Thank you for reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count containing solid end rhyme throughout. The content will resonate with the many fans of the horror genre here. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
|
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count containing solid end rhyme throughout. The content will resonate with the many fans of the horror genre here. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
-
Thank you very much for reviewing and your kind comments and good luck wishes.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about having a fright when we see a hungry lion in the forest. When we see the lion in the circus or in a zoo, they give us a feeling of delight.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
|
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about having a fright when we see a hungry lion in the forest. When we see the lion in the circus or in a zoo, they give us a feeling of delight.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
-
Thank you for reviewing Sandra and your kind comments.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an excellent entry for the writing prompt contest. The image you chose works well with the poem and the brief format conveys a message succinctly. Good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
|
This is an excellent entry for the writing prompt contest. The image you chose works well with the poem and the brief format conveys a message succinctly. Good luck!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
-
Thank you Susan for reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah...just never understood the whole horror/fright genre, but it is certainly appealing to many!! ;) Your offering certainly fits the requirements of this limited format... thank you for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
|
Yeah...just never understood the whole horror/fright genre, but it is certainly appealing to many!! ;) Your offering certainly fits the requirements of this limited format... thank you for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
-
Thanks Yvette for reviewing and your kind comments and wishes.
Comment from the13thpoet
Happy Friday to you fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
|
Happy Friday to you fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
-
Thank you for reviewing and your kind comments and the good luck wishes.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. You did an excellent job with your 1-6-1-1. I would like to make a suggestion. I had a little difficulty reading the poem on the red background. You might consider increasing the font size or putting the letters in bold typeface. It's probably only a problem for old people like me. Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
|
Hello mystery writer. You did an excellent job with your 1-6-1-1. I would like to make a suggestion. I had a little difficulty reading the poem on the red background. You might consider increasing the font size or putting the letters in bold typeface. It's probably only a problem for old people like me. Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
-
Thank you Robert for reviewing and your kind comments. I appreciate your suggestion and will correct it.
-
You're welcome.
-
I changed it, so it should be better and you are not old. (smile)
-
Much easier to read. Good work. You're right. Ancient is a better word. :) Robert
-
LOL okay I will go with ancient, but I still say you are not old Robert.
-
Fossilized? tee hee
-
LOL you just keep getting more creative.
-
I would go with prehistoric but it's making me feel older. :(
-
Oh my goodness, definitely not prehistoric. I checked your site and you are NOT old lol.
-
OK. How about V E R Y mature?
