Think Twice
1-6-1 poem that ryhmes.3 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
CIAO POET: I like your posting here in that it reminds me of how I was brought up.
When I was a kid, in school, they taught me to: "Think and Do." At home they taught me to: "Look before I leap." And in church they taught me to be: "Anxious for nothing...but be patient." All of that meant to me: "Think Twice." In church they taught me to, "WAIT," for God and lean not on my own understanding....because there is a way which seems right to man...but the end of that way...is the way of destruction and death. Your posting here brings back to my memory all of these things. Thank you for sharing. God bless you, poet. Ciao, my friend. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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CIAO POET: I like your posting here in that it reminds me of how I was brought up.
When I was a kid, in school, they taught me to: "Think and Do." At home they taught me to: "Look before I leap." And in church they taught me to be: "Anxious for nothing...but be patient." All of that meant to me: "Think Twice." In church they taught me to, "WAIT," for God and lean not on my own understanding....because there is a way which seems right to man...but the end of that way...is the way of destruction and death. Your posting here brings back to my memory all of these things. Thank you for sharing. God bless you, poet. Ciao, my friend. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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You had such a different upbringing from me ..you had lots of people directing you I n the right way.
I can see why you grew up to be a sensitive and caring person ..you are joyful and you have an open loving heart. You share your wisdom with others.
I can sense through your poems your love for your neighbour and for children ..we are so so different ..but it is a fact also that opposites attract.
I hope you have a peaceful Sunday, Rhonnie!
ooopppsss I nearly forgot ..thanks for the 6 star vote ( big smile )
Comment from the13thpoet
Happy Friday to you fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Happy Friday to you fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the positve response and the five shiny stars .
All the best for the on coming weekend, poet!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. I never want to be in a position where I'm looking at a shark as indicated by your picture. The poem was excellent. It was well done and I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. I never want to be in a position where I'm looking at a shark as indicated by your picture. The poem was excellent. It was well done and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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I'm delighted that you liked my wee poem.. thank you for the 5 star vote.
I actually had it in my note book for awhile.
Glad I could use it finally .
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Nice job. :)
