Terms of Engagement
They might evolve over time, but they're always there...18 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is so amusing. I figured it had to do with some kid abducting the missing GI Joes. A really fun approach and the illustration is great. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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This is so amusing. I figured it had to do with some kid abducting the missing GI Joes. A really fun approach and the illustration is great. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your fun review!!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Oh, how fun. Kidnapping your sister's doll. You could consider it a compliment - the highest compliment a girl could give - choosing your commander as her doll's boyfriend . . . And then perhaps Barbie could become involved in a dangerous spy mission on his behalf, and you could take her for that . . . Oh, the possibilities!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Oh, how fun. Kidnapping your sister's doll. You could consider it a compliment - the highest compliment a girl could give - choosing your commander as her doll's boyfriend . . . And then perhaps Barbie could become involved in a dangerous spy mission on his behalf, and you could take her for that . . . Oh, the possibilities!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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lol. So glad this one got your imagination going this morning -- thank you for reading and reviewing!
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! This is verrry clever. You had me fooled until the very end when I realized these were kids playing with toys. I kind of wondered why you didn't choose a real, human officer for your picture, but even that hint didn't give it away! :)
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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LOL! This is verrry clever. You had me fooled until the very end when I realized these were kids playing with toys. I kind of wondered why you didn't choose a real, human officer for your picture, but even that hint didn't give it away! :)
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Oh, Phyllis -- thank you, THANK YOU!! I am so very glad you enjoyed my mischievous little Landon and his kidnapping scheme!! Thank you for those lovely stars and have a wonderful week ahead!!
Comment from Rikki66
Good luck with this entry. I like the twist with the children and the toys. Feeding Barbie to the dog is a good threat. The rivalry between siblings never ends.
Rikki
LXVI
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Good luck with this entry. I like the twist with the children and the toys. Feeding Barbie to the dog is a good threat. The rivalry between siblings never ends.
Rikki
LXVI
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thanks so much for your fun review!!
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My sincerest welcome.
LXVI
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this spoof as Dolly was kidnapped here! This is a fun write that started off in quite a serious tone until I realised this is a fun story about toys, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed this spoof as Dolly was kidnapped here! This is a fun write that started off in quite a serious tone until I realised this is a fun story about toys, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful review! So glad you enjoyed!!
Comment from Sallyo
Great fun! Of course, the picture gave away the point... up to a point, but the story is - er - engaging. Just one thing... telling mom! telling Mom!
That last line knocks it out of the ring.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Great fun! Of course, the picture gave away the point... up to a point, but the story is - er - engaging. Just one thing... telling mom! telling Mom!
That last line knocks it out of the ring.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for this awesome review, SallyO -- so glad you enjoyed!!!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahahaha. Terms of engagement for sure! Siblings certainly do have some serious "terms of engagement"and even though I guessed what was coming, I loved every word.This was flawlessly written, and so much fun!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Hahahahaha. Terms of engagement for sure! Siblings certainly do have some serious "terms of engagement"and even though I guessed what was coming, I loved every word.This was flawlessly written, and so much fun!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Beautiful Lady -- glad you enjoyed this bit of fun! ;) I couldn't take any more 'dark writes' and had to lighten up the place... :) ;) I didn't check in on you because you had said your were doing some work on your autobiography and trying to spend more time with church friends (and not the computer - lol!). I do hope you're doing all right up there ... so good to see your face there!! ;) :) Take care and enjoy the weekend! ;)
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You're very welcome. :) (Been down with a terrible cold that keeps refreshing itself, actually... *sigh*)
Comment from Sylvia Page
What an imagination! You did fool me into thinking that it was a real life situation. Very clever. Very good imagery emerged. Wishing you all the very best in the contest.
Sylvia
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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What an imagination! You did fool me into thinking that it was a real life situation. Very clever. Very good imagery emerged. Wishing you all the very best in the contest.
Sylvia
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Oh, I am so happy you enjoyed! Thank you for your wonderful review!!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a thoroughly engaging and complete story within the word count allotted. I love you approach as it is refreshingly fun and entertaining. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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LOL! This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a thoroughly engaging and complete story within the word count allotted. I love you approach as it is refreshingly fun and entertaining. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Oh, I'm so very glad you enjoyed! Thank you so much for your wonderful review!!
Comment from Peter Nwaobi
This is some intriguing story. Read it a couple of times to show how I liked it. Wait, how come Landon and his Sister are enemies? Or am I missing something.... So she kidnapped her boyfriend from her brother's camp... Lol.
Quite an interesting read. Thumbs up
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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This is some intriguing story. Read it a couple of times to show how I liked it. Wait, how come Landon and his Sister are enemies? Or am I missing something.... So she kidnapped her boyfriend from her brother's camp... Lol.
Quite an interesting read. Thumbs up
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review!
