Eric's Epic Adventures
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Final Chapter"Another adventure for Eric
31 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I am sure that the school children will enjoy reading it very much. Good luck with your story in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I am sure that the school children will enjoy reading it very much. Good luck with your story in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for reading the last chapter in Eric's book. I'm just waiting to hear it has been released on Amazon. Can't wait. Thank you again! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from dragonpoet
NIce happy ending to the story. Girl gets saved and everyone parts friends. It must be hard for Eric to meet all these people, make attachments and then have to return home. It does seem that history and movies do tell a lot of strories is a skewed manner.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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NIce happy ending to the story. Girl gets saved and everyone parts friends. It must be hard for Eric to meet all these people, make attachments and then have to return home. It does seem that history and movies do tell a lot of strories is a skewed manner.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much, Joan. I'm now putting it together to publish it, and give it to my grandson, Eric. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are most kindly welcome. It will be a great gift.
Joan
Comment from alexisleech
What a lovely ending! I'm sure Eric will be over the moon when he gets to read it. Sorry I'm so late reviewing, but things have been hectic, all complicated by a summer cold - coughing and wheezing with a nose running like a tap is no fun!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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What a lovely ending! I'm sure Eric will be over the moon when he gets to read it. Sorry I'm so late reviewing, but things have been hectic, all complicated by a summer cold - coughing and wheezing with a nose running like a tap is no fun!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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I haven't seen you for a few days and thought you were busy. I'll look for you tomorrow. Thank you I so sorry you've been so poorly. Blame it on Brexit, it's getting the blame for everything now. lol. Thanks for the lovey 6 stars, my friend, have a double brandy and go to bed early. At least you'll get a good night sleep! Big hugs. xxxx Sandra
Comment from Iza Deleanu
All is well, when ends well: Ellie is safe home, and Eric has to go back from where he came. " It would've been nice to stay for a while. Everyone's been so friendly ... well, once they'd got used to me and Herbie." A grin flooded his face. "I won't be taking too much notice of the cowboy and Indian programs anymore. Everything I thought I knew about them is so different. The books and films don't tell it right." Thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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All is well, when ends well: Ellie is safe home, and Eric has to go back from where he came. " It would've been nice to stay for a while. Everyone's been so friendly ... well, once they'd got used to me and Herbie." A grin flooded his face. "I won't be taking too much notice of the cowboy and Indian programs anymore. Everything I thought I knew about them is so different. The books and films don't tell it right." Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for following my story, and for all the lovely reviews, Iza. I'm delighted you enjoyed the ending. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sandra, my heart is all a flutter...Eric got to see Drozig again...and Ellie went home to her mother...and the Indians will drop by to hear her sing again...life is good...
I think that is awesome Eric's school bought copies of the first book...and now they will have the second one as well...he will be famous...Kristy is going to check with the library this week...we may still be to soon...but maybe it will help them move along...
another awesome story my wonderful sweet friend...will be waiting for when it is published...Noah will love it...very well thought of sweet girl...and keep them coming...I'm sure you have nothing else to do...LOL...your amazing...love you lots...always...Linda xxoo
Hi to Ian for me...xxoo
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Hi Sandra, my heart is all a flutter...Eric got to see Drozig again...and Ellie went home to her mother...and the Indians will drop by to hear her sing again...life is good...
I think that is awesome Eric's school bought copies of the first book...and now they will have the second one as well...he will be famous...Kristy is going to check with the library this week...we may still be to soon...but maybe it will help them move along...
another awesome story my wonderful sweet friend...will be waiting for when it is published...Noah will love it...very well thought of sweet girl...and keep them coming...I'm sure you have nothing else to do...LOL...your amazing...love you lots...always...Linda xxoo
Hi to Ian for me...xxoo
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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No, I don't have anything else to do, lol, I get Graham to do it for me!!! Hmm, that would be good! LOL. Thank you so much for another amazing review and for giving me one of your precious sixes. I'm just trying to get some illustrations for it. Believe it or not, it was easier to get dinosaurs, spaceships and aliens than Indians! I do hope Noah will enjoy it, and I hope Eric will, too!!! lol. I'll be writing some more adventures later, but I'm going to write some poems for a while.
You've been wonderful, my friend, your support and encouragement has been endless and I love you for it. Trying to get my book into your libraries, totally gobsmacked me, thank you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this story and seeing Drozig again. He will make appearances in all the stories and Zig will come sometimes too.
You say hello to Noah when you next speak to him and give him my love. Love you, too! Big hugs, Sandra xxxx
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you'll have to tell me where you met Graham...I need someone like him...LOL...I would think Indians would be the easiest sweet girl...kids love cowboys and Indians...but I think Dinosaurs have taken over...LOL...
and you my amazing sweet friend are so very welcome...now I am off to the doctor...because yesterday I walked into a glass door...and have an Easter egg over my eye...and my eye is starting to hurt...LOL...always something...LOL...love you so bunches...Linda xxoo
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sandra, what a lovely, ending to this enticing story. Eric must be over the moon and so proud of his grandmother. Just imagine that the school has bought several copies of the first one. I'm so happy for you, but mind you, both books are so well written. So they are to see Drozig again? I hope that means that we get yet another wee book. Well, I certainly hope so. I have so enjoyed reading. A big hug, my friend. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Hi Sandra, what a lovely, ending to this enticing story. Eric must be over the moon and so proud of his grandmother. Just imagine that the school has bought several copies of the first one. I'm so happy for you, but mind you, both books are so well written. So they are to see Drozig again? I hope that means that we get yet another wee book. Well, I certainly hope so. I have so enjoyed reading. A big hug, my friend. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for the six stars and wonderful review, Ulla! Yes, there will be more. I think there will be a series of them, but I'm going to have a break from writing for a while. Are you home now? Or still enjoying travelling around Europe with your friend? I do envy you. I'll be still watching out for your chapters even though I won't be writing. Big hugs my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxxx
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Hi Sandra. We are in Toledo right now. Tomorrow we're off to Madrid for three days. Then Marjory flies back to Scotland and I'll make my way back home. It's been a marvellous trip.
I'm so glad that you're making your story into a series. You do deserve time out, though. I'm also glad that you'll still find time to follow along my tale. I would really miss that if you didn't. Big hugs back to you. Ulla xxxx
Comment from giraffmang
Very nice rounding off of the story here
Eric had never heard a sound as lovely as hers - this reads a tad odd. maybe a sound as lovely as her voice, or, a voice as lovely as hers.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Very nice rounding off of the story here
Eric had never heard a sound as lovely as hers - this reads a tad odd. maybe a sound as lovely as her voice, or, a voice as lovely as hers.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Yes, you're right again! lol. I've changed 'sound' to 'voice'. Obvious really, wasn't it??? Thanks again, my friend. Now to get it illustrated and another edit and then published for Eric. Thank you for all your support, I've really appreciated it. Another hug! Sandra xxx
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh, I Love a happy ending. =} Well done. A fun story and as I suspected the medicine man was an alien. I'm sure your grandchildren will love this when it's a book and they can read it for themselves. Rox
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Oh, I Love a happy ending. =} Well done. A fun story and as I suspected the medicine man was an alien. I'm sure your grandchildren will love this when it's a book and they can read it for themselves. Rox
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Thanks, Rox. I do too. Thank you so much for the lovely sixth star, my friend, I really have appreciated your views on this story. Big hugs! Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image and final chapter, Sandra.
-It has been a good story to follow,
and so special for Eric and Ellie.
-How nice that the school
is involved with the books.
-I hope you don't get bad
marks from the headteacher:)
-It was a nice way to end the book
with Drozig being the Medicine Man.
-Eric and Herbie were so thrilled,
and I imagine Drozig had a bit of fun, too.
-Good explanation by Drozig about why he was
there in that role, and it's nice to know
that he could return one day with his son.
-Then, the attention is turned to the
celebration and Ellie's wonderful singing.
-Does the real Ellie sing, too?
-The Chief gives Eric a lovely gift to remember
them by, and then they must all say their good-byes.
-I am sure it was a mixture of sadness and
happiness since one family is re-united,
and another will be very soon.
-You ended the story just right, showing
the importance of family, and what Eric learned, too.
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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-Great image and final chapter, Sandra.
-It has been a good story to follow,
and so special for Eric and Ellie.
-How nice that the school
is involved with the books.
-I hope you don't get bad
marks from the headteacher:)
-It was a nice way to end the book
with Drozig being the Medicine Man.
-Eric and Herbie were so thrilled,
and I imagine Drozig had a bit of fun, too.
-Good explanation by Drozig about why he was
there in that role, and it's nice to know
that he could return one day with his son.
-Then, the attention is turned to the
celebration and Ellie's wonderful singing.
-Does the real Ellie sing, too?
-The Chief gives Eric a lovely gift to remember
them by, and then they must all say their good-byes.
-I am sure it was a mixture of sadness and
happiness since one family is re-united,
and another will be very soon.
-You ended the story just right, showing
the importance of family, and what Eric learned, too.
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Bless your heart, my dear friend! Thank you so very much for all those lovely stars, top and bottom!!! LOL, I love them all. You have been a wonderful supporter of my writing, and have always encouraged me as I've gone along. I can't thank you enough. The biggest hug is winging its way over the pond, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving, Sandra. I am glad you liked all of the shiny stars. The biggest hug is appreciated, too.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Sandra. I'm sure Eric loved your story as did your readers. I missed a chapter here or there, but your catch-up blurb reminded me where we were in the story. I like your descriptions, scene setting, and dialogue. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Hi Sandra. I'm sure Eric loved your story as did your readers. I missed a chapter here or there, but your catch-up blurb reminded me where we were in the story. I like your descriptions, scene setting, and dialogue. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Marilyn. I'll be busy now getting this edited and illustrated, but will post a poem or two... I'm glad you like the parts you read, that's so encouraging. :)) Sandra xx
